Blaze and Mary's Adventure XD

Blaze

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    "BLAZE GET UP!" screamed Mary

    "What now Mary WHY ARE YOU IN MY ROOM ic how it is ;) i see what you are here" said Blaze

    "BLAZE STOP ACTING WIERD WE HAVE TO GO SHOPPING FOR MY DRESS"

    "Yeah yeah im up"

    "GOOD"

    |"TORCHIC!!!!!!!!!"

    Just then a torchic flys in the room and lands on Blaze's soldier

    "omg blaze look its a torchic!" said Mary

    "Whoa do you think i can keep it? Hey little guy dont be afraid :) "

    "torchic :D"

    "awww it likes you Blaze" said Mary

    "yeah well who doesnt ;) " said Blaze

    "BLAZE!!!!!!" screamed Mary

    "hey turn on the tv Mary" said Blaze

    "COME ON BLAZE I NEED TO GET A DRESS"

    "Im sorry I wanna see how my older brother is going as first day as gym leader!"

    "Ok what channel?"

    "He's on PPN-TV"

    "Oh OK" said Mary

    NEWSCASTER: "ow amazing it seems knowone can defeat new 706 Gym leader JKaizer of PokeWizard town! I see a future Elite Four member today thats all back to you Steve"

    "hoa I guess he's doing really well Blaze! He's so dreamy..." said Mary

    "EXCUSE ME IM SO MUCH BETTER IM GOING TO BEAT HIM JUST YOU WAIT AND SEE!" screamed Blaze

    "Blaze you know im just kidding you will always be my favorite ;)" said Mary

    "Yeah U better" said Blaze

    BLAZE GET DOWN HERE AND WHATS MARY DOING IN YOUR ROOM ALONE!" said Blaze's Mom

    MOM STOP EMBARRASSING ME I WILL BE RIGHT DOWN

    You have a funny mom :wub: Said Mary

    haha i see you blushing ;) said Blaze

    AM NOT!

    yeah yeah what ever we gotta go downstairs

    Blaze and Mary go downstairs to see Blaze's longtime rival Rasa standing at the door with Professor Serebii

    "LOOK THERES MY TORCHIC PROFESSOR! BLAZE STOLE IT MAKE HIM GIVE IT BACK!" said Rasa

    "Now hold on Rasa lets ask Torchic about this"

    Professor Serebii then pulls out a Poke Device

    "Now torchic whats wrong?" said Professor Serebii

    "torchic torchic!"

    "ahh i see" said Professor Oak "Turns out he doesn't like you Rasa, he has always wanted to be with Blaze since he saw Torchic hatch from his ehh a few years back"

    "NOW WHAT AM I GONNA HAVE!"

    "Well, I have a Meowth you want that?"said Professor Oak and hands Rasa the Pokeball

    "SURE ANYTHING IS BETTER THEN THAT STUPID TORCHIC SINCE IT HAS BEEN BRAINWASHED BY BLAZE!" said Rasa

    "TORCHIC"

    Torchic then let out a ember and caught Rasa's hair on fire

    "HELPS ME IM ON FIRE!"

    "Totadile I choose you!" screamed Mary "Water Gun attack!"

    "totadiiiiiiiiiiile!"

    totadile then shot out a big blast of water and sent Rasa and His Meowth flying out the door

    "I WILL GET YOU GUYS JUST WAIT!"

    "Whoa Mary I didn't know you had a Pokemon!"

    "Yeah I just got it today I was going to wait till after the mall to show you because we all know how you love Pokemon Breeding"

    "haha thats true"

    "torchic :D" "totadile!"

    "It looks like they like each other Blaze :wub:

    yeah just like us ;)

    "well I must be going good luck you too! Oh before I forget here's your PokeGear! here's one PokeDex and Poke-Mini Labtop XD use them well, I hope to see you both Pokemon Masters and you also a Pokemon Breeder Blaze Xd"

    Thanks Professor!" said Mary and Blaze

    Little did they know they were being spied on the whole time

    "Heh lets see how you do Blaze" said JKaizer who was hiding in the bush's who took out his cell phone and dialed a number "Sir it''s going according to plan, we are ready to start part 2"

    "Excellent" said the mysterious man

    TO BE CONTINUED!

    If you haven't noticed I used familar Pokemon Webmasters and Posters XD see more coming soon with chapter 2!
     
    No discription, No real story, It seems more like a chat room louge then a fic. You might wanna fix this up fast. You usually tend not to use acronyms with fics as not all people know what they mean.
    By the way it seems more like a add for random sites.
     
    do to peoples negative remarks blaze and marys story will be discontinued at PokeCommunity, the story can be found at blaze affliated forums where the story can grow without this negative remarks a certain someone makes

    the story soon will have its own comic so stay tuned I might bring this story back here if needed

    and kinda thanks blue I have been busy rethinking and rewriting there story you will if you view a different forum i mod at or something you will find im modeling it off pokemon the anime but I am adding my own twists

    just to let you know Blaze and Mary are the main characters although I am changing Marys name to Bianca and yes hidden inside are hidden messages to view sites XD

    but its just because i want the story to hit home

    anyways good day
     
    If it's a comic before, let it be a comic.

    peoples? Only Blue commented to your fic. Your fic is squat. No description. No plot. The dialogue didn't make a single sense at all. I have no clue what the heck is happening and I'm sure you didn't read the thread that is stickied in this forum. It says "READ FIRST." Get it?

    Now, I don't really care if your fanfic is discontinued. Why not be like other people and just silently discontinue it?
     
    because im not like other people XD and it was just a test at a project I am currently working on so they results are helping me very well with some future content I have been proposing
     
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