Butterfly Lips (tell what ya think!)

molepeople27

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    I once knew a fortuneteller, from the city above
    Stuffed with creation and jewelry of sorts
    She castled stars of old temples of time
    And begged to differ, a with a grimace of ice
    Out of the pavement a solider arose
    With mirrors of peasants, politely, he proposed:
    "I'm an angel, foreseen, within the arrows you carve.
    Dissecting rodents, in black hole graveyards"
    And it fit so perfectly, like steam from a stove
    I had no other choice, no beacon or two
    No cataracts, could ever undo-
    I forgot, who I was, and started nailing my head
    But it damaged just more then our frontal lobe
    I was Siamese, a bonding with two
    Surgery was nice, it put me to rest
    A fog a pinkness that had lips like a gun
    With the brightest of hillside-
    She held the palm of insanity and became one

    She told me once : "All lights will come softly-
    Each number will shake, but it's infinite-
    And so sweet, ember, I must rise again"
    I, blue windmill, made me laugh over my spew
    Cherished like thunder, in a bottle of glue
    I tucked my moonlight, had sewn my mouth
    And lain by the river and with a grumpy old stout

    An alligator eye, the night owl's keep-
    Judges the fortuneteller with the way she speaks:
    "She is dusty inside, without a conscience to spare.-
    Her 'tells' are just gardens that burn, lilies will flare-
    From coloring books from the past,
    Each color will squirm, and build a new direction-
    From a village of worms- cascading down butterfly lips"

    A preacher remarks, with a compass tattooed:
    "It's figment of trust, which you must pursue"
    She, took it away, with a slip of the wrist-
    A gravestone rose, that nobody knew
     
    This was surprisingly bizarre.
    I found it hard to understand. But remember, there are dozens and dozens out there who will love this!
    Nice job!
     
    It was the title that actually made me post a reply on this thread.

    This is actually quite well written. TJGamer is right; the poem is a bit difficult to understand though. But still, this seems creative enough for me to like it. Well done, and keep it up.
     
    sounds awesome but i'd like some sort of commentary to go along with it to understand it better. But at the same time its cool because its mysterious. . . so maybe i don't want to know more about it.
     
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