Can you Rate my Deck?(YGO)

[Makoto]

Hi. before I tell you my Deck, kmow that unlike other Deck Rating threads, i don't want any suggestions about replacing my cards, since I don't have the money(I come from a poor family).

Monsters: 23

1 Rogue Doll
1 Slot Machine
1 labyrinth Wall
1 Ryu-kishin Powered
2 4-starred Ladybugs of Doom
1 Ray and Temperature
1 Island Turtle
1 La Jinn(Genie guy)
2 Hyozanryus
1 Archfiend of Gilfer
1 Hane-Hane
1 Blue-Eyes White Dragon
1 Kaiser Sea Horse
1 Witch Of the Black Forest
1 Opticlops
1 Nimble Momonga
1 Mystical Elf
1 Dragon Dwelling in the Cave
1 Lord of D.
1 Battle Ox
1 Paladin of White Dragon

Magics:16

1 Raregold Armor
1 Monster Reborn
1 7 completed
1 Buster Rancher
1 Dian Keto
1 Change of Heart
1 Gravity Axe-Grarl
1 Megamorph
1 Card Destruction
1 Soul Exchange
1 White Dragon Ritual
1 Fairy Meteor Crush
1 Flute of Summoning Dragon
1 Curse of fiend
1 Exchange
1 Mountain

Traps: a lowly 4
1 Tower of Babel
1 Trap Hole
1 Enchanted Javelin
1 Shadow Spell

 

[gohan_rules00]

it basicly looks like the starter deck with a couple of changes to me 4/10.

 

[Makoto]

Hi. before I tell you my Deck, kmow that unlike other Deck Rating threads, i don't want any suggestions about replacing my cards, since I don't have the money(I come from a poor family).

Monsters: 23

1 Rogue Doll
1 Slot Machine
1 labyrinth Wall
1 Ryu-kishin Powered
2 4-starred Ladybugs of Doom
1 Ray and Temperature
1 Island Turtle
1 La Jinn(Genie guy)
2 Hyozanryus
1 Archfiend of Gilfer
1 Hane-Hane
1 Blue-Eyes White Dragon
1 Kaiser Sea Horse
1 Witch Of the Black Forest
1 Opticlops
1 Nimble Momonga
1 Mystical Elf
1 Dragon Dwelling in the Cave
1 Lord of D.
1 Battle Ox
1 Paladin of White Dragon

Magics:16

1 Raregold Armor
1 Monster Reborn
1 7 completed
1 Buster Rancher
1 Dian Keto
1 Change of Heart
1 Gravity Axe-Grarl
1 Megamorph
1 Card Destruction
1 Soul Exchange
1 White Dragon Ritual
1 Fairy Meteor Crush
1 Flute of Summoning Dragon
1 Curse of fiend
1 Exchange
1 Mountain

Traps: a lowly 4
1 Tower of Babel
1 Trap Hole
1 Enchanted Javelin
1 Shadow Spell

Well, some really nice guy who's my dad's friend just gave me tons of cards. if anyone can think of which of these to use in a new deck(along with the quoted ones) then it'd really help.

Pot of Greed
Call of the Haunted
2 De-spell
Infernal flame emperor
Ocean Dragon Lord Neo-Daedalus
Spell Shield Type-8
2 Fenrir
Premature Burial
3 A legendary Ocean
Sea Serpent Warrior of Darkness
3 Mother Grizzly
Torrential Tribute
Creeping Doom Manta
2 Reload
Levia-Dragon Daedalus
Snatch Steal
2 Gravity Bind
Big Wave Small Wave
Mobius the Frost Monarch
2 Salvage
Tribe-infecting Virus
Tornado Wall
Mystical Space Typhoon
7 Colored Fish
Xing Zhen Hu
Star boy
2 Dust Tornado
Unshaven Angler
Heavy Storm
Amphibious Bugroth Mk-3
Creature Swap
Mermaid Knight
Hammer Shot
Space Mambo
Molten Destruction
Fox Fire
Backfire
Necklace of Command
Ufo turtle
Ultimate Baseball Kid
Little Chimera
Level Limit- Area B
Shield and Sword
Diffusion Wave-Motion
Malevolent Nuzzler
Dark Hole
Really cool-looking Red-Eyes Black Dragon
Trap Jammer
Mirror Wall
Cemetary Bomb
Divine Wrath
Pikeru's Circle Of Enchantment
DNA surgery
Gorgon's Eye
Red-Eyes Black Chick (CUUUUTE!)
Needle Wall
Thunder Ruler
Scapegoat
Coffin Seller
Flint
Big Eye
Right Leg of the Forbidden One
Jinzo
Gust
Giga Gagagigo
another Witch Of the Black Forest
Hane-Hane
Opticlops
Nimble momonga

All without numbers before them are only 1.

 

[Dark Magician ruler]

it is a good beginners deck. I would give it a 6 out of 10 :D ;)

 

[VanirElf]

um..ok I looked over the new cards you got

every deck should have the following

Pot of Greed
Call of the Haunted
Mystical Space Typhoon
Tribe-Infecting Virus

so u'r gonna wanna use those since you have them.

I also noticed that you recieved a lot of Water Attribute cards,
I suggest building a water based deck.

Use the Frost Monarch and keep the Levia Dragon Card as a side deck.

a general tip for deck building don't go over 40 cards

try for no more than 18 monster cards
16/17 spell cards
4/6 trap cards.

as for your first deck post here's my rating

2/10 sorry, it needs a lot of work.

I suggest you just take it apart and combine your old and new cards
and try and build a water deck since it's the most common type you seem
to have.

good luck with your future deck building.

any dueling or deck questions e-mail me, i'd be happy to help out a fellow
duelist.

 

[the skate board kid]

You just need alot more traps. Id give it a 5.5/10

~TSBK~