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Can't wake up

BattleBeard

The Ultimate Beard
    • 44
    Posts
    14
    Years
    Where am I?
    The dark.
    This place is so cold...
    I feel forgotten.

    What happened?
    Don't most Pokemon just faint?
    I pushed myself.
    Pushed myself too hard...

    Was that the last battle I'll ever fight in?
    My trainer relied on me...
    That gym leader should have been defeated.
    I was his last resort...

    I pushed and pushed.
    I GAVE AND GAVE...
    and I lost...I failed him...

    I'm gone.

    forever
     
    It's about a Pokemon dead. Can't you tell?
     
    I could tell pretty easily. It's so straightforward that you can't miss it.
    But maybe a little bit too straightforward. As it takes a little bit of soul from it. But, no big deal.
    Personally, I think it's an excellent concept. Seriously, people don't put Pokémon dying to much thought. It's rather unbelievable, but still very interesting.
    Nice work.
     
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