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Cerese912

I heart pokemon :)
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    You really need to work on anatomy. Unless you're making chibi, the heads need to be smaller. Also, the way the arms and legs bend shouldn't be so curvy. .​
     
    Really needs some improvements.
    The body don't match the face. Your hands and legs... some are out of shape while others curve too much (which looks too flexible @_@)
     
    It's kinda good for beginners and as what other said it needs some improvement okies? :3
     
    Haha. Yeah. You guys should have seen my first drawings from years ago. 0_o. Like my drama teacher always said "Critique is to improve yourself and your performance." I'm just now learning how to do hair and eyes. ^_^
     
    shae mark said:
    Hi Everyone!!
    I'm a new Graphic Design student and I created this spot to publish
    and share things related to what I'm studying and enjoy as well.
    Mainly I'll be posting things related to Drawing, Painting,
    Photography, Graphic Design, Web Design, Graphic Design Software such
    as Photoshop, Illustrator. My own stuff/drawings I do for practice and/
    or assignments from class.

    I'm fairly new to everything myself so It's also a way for me to learn
    better by sharing what I'm learning and will learn along the way. It's
    nothing professional basically I would like to create a Network with
    people that share my interest, and I would love to see other related
    blogs to follow as well, but they are so hard to find so this is why I
    posted this note here. So, anyone who has a blog related to any of
    those topics has my interest already! lol

    So you're welcome to visit me and I'll definitely check out yours as
    well.
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    Spam much? I don't think this should go in other people's threads.

    And the drawing are pretty good, better than I could do anyways. But as others have said, probably work on proportions.
     
    What is definately wrong about this character is that their limbs are round! No real person in real life as limbs as flexible as a rope. Anime/Manga imitation is all about trying to get the human figure perfect, so keep working at it.

    The girl's head is proportioned unusually, and the chin is offset way too much, giving the girl a very, er... masculine feel ._.
     
    0_o maybe i drew it out of habit. i'm a pretty masculine girl.

    i'll work on it.
     
    Raaji-chan (Blahman117) said you wanted me to critique your newest works, correct? That's what I'm here for, hun. ^_~

    For your latest picture, you need to make the hands a bit bigger. The hand should be about as big as the face is, speaking in an anatomically correct manner, of course. When connecting the neck with the shoulders, you should make the lines touch each other. What you have here makes it look like her back is slightly hunched. Unless she is Quasimodo's sister, this shouldn't happen.

    Also, with the arms, they should be thicker. Not too thick, of course. What I find helps is if you look at yourself in the mirror and check the parts of your body that you wish to draw. Mind, it does sound silly, but it works. The clothes look fine to me, but the purse should be more detailed. It looks like a square, basically. Just a pink square with a line coming out of it. Not just that, but the coloring on it is mediocre at best.

    Whew, that was a lot. I hope this helps you.​
     
    ShinjisLover said:
    Raaji-chan (Blahman117) said you wanted me to critique your newest works, correct? That's what I'm here for, hun. ^_~​



    For your latest picture, you need to make the hands a bit bigger. The hand should be about as big as the face is, speaking in an anatomically correct manner, of course. When connecting the neck with the shoulders, you should make the lines touch each other. What you have here makes it look like her back is slightly hunched. Unless she is Quasimodo's sister, this shouldn't happen.​

    Also, with the arms, they should be thicker. Not too thick, of course. What I find helps is if you look at yourself in the mirror and check the parts of your body that you wish to draw. Mind, it does sound silly, but it works. The clothes look fine to me, but the purse should be more detailed. It looks like a square, basically. Just a pink square with a line coming out of it. Not just that, but the coloring on it is mediocre at best.​

    Whew, that was a lot. I hope this helps you.​
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    Wow thanks. I knew that was pretty random but it really helped alot.

    P.S I'm surprised you didn't say anything about her cat making that nasty mess lol
     
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