Chilly Spring Day

Blaziken15

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    This song means a lot to me. It was written about a problem that happened at my school on May 5, 2011. If you want to here the story, PM me and I will tell you. But be prepared for sadness. Without further ado, here's my song, Chilly Spring Day.

    Chilly Spring Day

    Verse 1

    I met her when I was 12 years old
    I wanted to talk but my feet got cold
    She knew that I had feelings for her
    She didn't know who I was
    She had zero intentions for love
    And I had been hurt quiet enough
    So I told her my feelings left
    She was over filled with joy​

    We've been friends ever since
    Oh, but I still love her
    And I'm barely standing it​

    Chorus

    My feelings started going away
    Then she grabbed my hand on that freezing day
    And the feelings just rushed back
    A boy who's fallen madly in love
    A girl who has feelings for another someone
    And her love is to a good friend
    Tomorrow will hurt more than it did today
    'Cause I remember that one moment
    On that Chilly Spring Day

    Verse 2

    Her crush had asked her out
    But her mind wasn't made up
    So she asked for my advice
    I didn't know what to say
    I decided to tell the truth
    I told her he'd be lucky to have you
    And that he's a great guy
    She just smiled and told me thanks​

    Now they're dating 'cause of me
    Oh, and my hearts broken
    And this time beyond repair​

    Chorus 2

    Walking her home in the utter darkness
    Friends bothering but it didn't stop us
    Yet she still didn't notice me
    A boy who just wants her to see him
    A girl who is clueless to what he's thinking
    And all of this is killing me
    Tomorrow will hurt more than it did today
    'Cause I remember that one moment
    On that Chilly Spring Day

    Chorus 3

    Writting this song begins the crying
    Thinking about her starts the dying
    What will she think of me
    A girl who's dating the guy she wanted
    A boy who gave up his chance so that she could be with him
    Because her happiness comes first
    Tomorrow will hurt more than it did today
    "Cause I remember that one moment
    On that Chilly Spring Day
    Yeah that one moment
    On that Chilly Spring Day

    What do you think. Is it good? Please review my work.​
     
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