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BlisseysCharizard

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    This is my Romantic/Comedy Story about a Boy who has a very Secret Crush on a Girl in Creekson High. I hope you like it!


    Chapter 1: New faces

    It was a new school year in Creekson High and Johnathan Sheminsey was quite a Popular kid. His best friend Craig Morrison, had just came back from a Trip To Mexico, he said it was fun, coming in The first day of School with a sombrero on his head. We all laughed. Then there were the Old faces, such as Courtney Sanders, Kyle Paterson, Andrew Fox, and Sally Draneneer. Johnathan was hereing all of the old voices he heard in the classes throughout the day. "Get your summer assignments out"! "Your Late"! "Are you chewing gum"? it was torture. But, The morning went by in a snap, and then, it was lunch time.

    "What's wrong"? Said Craig to Johnathan, who was concerened.

    "Girls". Said Johnathan, in an akward voice.

    "Huh"? Said Craig.

    "You know it Craig. It's 12th Grade For God sakes! I haven't had one date, and I wanted to be married by College. All I do with Girls is give em' Comments. Hey Sugar". He said to A Girl passing by him.

    "Well, I have a Girlfriend. Andrew has a Girlfriend and Kyle has a Girlfriend. Courtney and Sally have Boyfriends". Said Craig.

    "You know what." said Johnathan.

    "No, what"? said Craig.

    " If I don't see a Girl I am smitten by by the end of the day, I thing I'm going to change my personality". said Johnathan, unsurely.

    "What Are you gonna change it to"? Asked Craig.

    "Well, I thing I'm gonna change it to a Naughty Personality to a Wild Personality. And if i don't change it by the end of the Day, I want you to hit me in the face as hard as you want". said Johnathan.

    "Sound's like a plan". said Craig.


    And so, by the end of the day, Johnathan haden't found one girl he was smitten by. Just as he was walking out of the school, he saw the girls of his dreams. He pictured him and her going out on a date, then getting married, then having there first "snuggle" together, then having children, then being laided to rest together.




    HE WAS INSTANTLY SMITTEN...................




    So, what did you think of The First Charter?
     
    It was okay, But it was kinda quick.. Especially towards the end with everything else happening in one paragraph.
     
    I on the other hand, thought it was good. As Emma said a bit quick towards the end, but that could be altered, otherwise, excellant.
     
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