Dannwe123's Random Pokéart!

[Dannwe123]

Here are some boxes i made in Photoshop Cs2:

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Pokémon Yellow for the Nintendo DS

Pokémon Crystal DS.
I made this long before HeartGold and SoulSilver where announced


Here i tried to recreate the japanese Pokémon Emerald logotype.
I'm quiet pleased with this one.

Here are some paintings i made with Colors! DS, a painting app for the DS:

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Red's cap.
My first painting with Colors.

Gold's cap (from HeartGold/SoulSilver)
This one took a really long time to make.

Just some random "manga" guy i made in Colors!.
I'm quite happy with his eyes, but apart from that, it's nothing special.
(It's not really manga, it's just manga - "ish")

Quagsire with new sugimori style on Colors! Ds
This turned out really good Imo.

Ivysaur done with old Sugimori style in Colors! Ds
Im surprised that the old Sugi-style is so complicated compared to new Sugi-style.

Feel free to comment and Criticise! (hope i didn't misspell that:D)

 

[Late]

I like those boxes, I have photoshop but I am not so good at making things with it (but my brother is). I have to practise with it. These things wants me to do the same! :D Emerald text is good. Those caps and manga guy are good too. I don't know how hard it's draw with DS. I just say exellent work.

 

[ShinjisLover]

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This looks very nice. But I'm not very good at. . Graphic-critique. XD (Speaking of which, it may be better going into the Graphic & Photography section. .)

The artwork for the Legendary Beasts doesn't match the artwork for Lugia and Ho-Oh which doesn't reflect well on the boxart. Not only that, but it seems like the placement of the Beasts on the boxart was rushed.

The "Emerald Version" looks out of place.

The green is much too big and part of the white is a bit lop-sided (near the top right).

This would've looked better without the hair.

Oi. . Err. . The face is definitely too pointed. The shading under the eyes wasn't really necessary (it just makes them look tired). The eyelashes under the right eye are too thick and the left eye is lopsided at the bottom. The mouth should be placed higher up.

↑ My Review ↓My Opinions

You definitely have potential in Graphics design, but your paintings aren't too well-done, mostly just in the coloring.
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[Dannwe123]

Thanks for the critique guys.
Update time!

I made Quagsires new artwork with Colors!Ds.
I might try the old Sugimori style some time.

 

[ShinjisLover]

The lines definitely are not as smooth as they should be. It's back feet are a bit too big (but I do like the way it looks) and its fingers, for its front paws, aren't round enough on its left arm. The color for the spine on its tail is more brown/green than dark blue and its mouth is lopsided. Lastly, its body should be longer.​

 

[Dannwe123]

New picture!!!
This one's Ivysaur, done with old Sugi-style in Colors! Ds

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[ShinjisLover]

There are many white spots, especially around the outline, which seems to be incredibly shaky. The line for the petal on the flower needs to be slimmer as it goes upward. One last thing. The face seems to be longer than the actual Sugimori artwork.

Overall, it looks rushed (from the white spots and outline, as I've stated earlier).​

 

[bewbs]

I like your messy and wild style. I think it worked well on Quagshire, which is my favorite and I think it is pretty cute.

 

[Dannwe123]

There are many white spots, especially around the outline, which seems to be incredibly shaky. The line for the petal on the flower needs to be slimmer as it goes upward. One last thing. The face seems to be longer than the actual Sugimori artwork.

Overall, it looks rushed (from the white spots and outline, as I've stated earlier).​

Yea i should probably take som more time to clean up the outlines...

 

[sanny the hedgehog]

everythings pretty good and all but there are somethings you could improve on
such as the head
well how do i put this in a nice way.....
it sorta looks like a dried up tiki head (sorry no offense or anything!!)
its a bit pointed and well it looks like it has wrinkles
thus making it look like a tiki head
the hats are good
the box art is great
the pokemon are good as well
and thats all im gonna say