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Dark Light

purple-sweetflower

Listen to the darkness.....
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    Now I dont care if it rhymes or not,so zip it........


    Dark Light~

    .Once the light has hit my heart,
    i've realized the dark is here.The dark light is something weard,
    but not to me but to you all.
    My dark light is un sight, to realize my light you must realize.....
    ....realize who you are..who I am..
    The dark light is inside, but if you dont take it out......
    the light shall shiver to ultimate dark.The dark that will hurt, quiver and
    cry.Take it out and exept who you are.Thats just who you are...
    exept...the dark light..
    Its who you are inside...and you shall be one day..the dark light itself...
     
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    Hi sister,wow its cool it expresses who u r inside..I realyy see through it....good job....
     
    *sight*
    I guess thats a good rating, but 4 me.....I give it a 10...I think the reason is because ....I know what it stands 4 and what it means.......
     
    Yeah,I give it a 10 as well,if u know my sis very well.....u know what it means, and its a deep pasion....so yeah, great job....
     
    pink-tiger said:
    Yeah,I give it a 10 as well,if u know my sis very well.....u know what it means, and its a deep pasion....so yeah, great job....
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    Thanks it means 2 me a lot...And now I have 2 go and find a dark siggy pic. 4 my sig.
     
    It has a very powerful message there. ^_^
    You're done a very good job, you just have to fix some grammarical errors. =D
     
    Caroline said:
    It has a very powerful message there. ^_^
    You're done a very good job, you just have to fix some grammarical errors. =D
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    thanks ......but its not that I dont know spelling,but I was not in a good typing mood that day...I'll fix it later.....Thanks again..finally another person understands.
     
    Hmm...Caroline is right. It has a few grammar errors, but it is good!
    I can definetley understand it. It has a powerful meaning behind it.

    8 out of 10
     
    Hehehe...I wasent having a good day..but this posr shall be the place were I keep my poetry....my next 1 is comming soon....
     
    I'll post my next poem now...

    When you left


    When you left,
    my hear shattered, as if my life was
    coming to an end.

    When you left,
    my heart cried out to you, my friend.
    But my cries were useless.

    When you left,
    I tried to hold my tears for you.
    But my heart couldn't hold them in.

    When you left,
    I laid where I played and remembered
    the old days...before you left.

    When you left,
    Oh, how I dreamed of our times
    together. And now I know...losing
    you was wrong.

    When you left,
    time was longer, happiness became shorter...

    When you left,
    my face became pale, my room
    became dark and gloomy.

    When you left,
    I became lonely, and I felt
    like crying inside.

    When you left,
    I wanted you to come back, and
    I wanted to smile again.

    When you left,
    I realized that my life had no meaning,
    and that you weren't coming back...

    When you left,
    I decided to leave myself, to reach
    you beyond..Just know, I'm coming
    my friend, and then I'll smile once again...
     
    *claps*

    It's SOOOO good yet SSOOOOOOO sad! Very, very, good.
    It shows great emotion as well. ^^ Keep it up! =D
     
    Wow, you finally posted that poem.
    I remembered when u did it at school.
    I almost cried its so sad. You do so many good poems sissy.^^
    Good job.Bye!!
     
    OH MY GOD....your poems are very beutiful SP*, I really do like them alot....Iam crying, I don't cry much but you poems touch me so much.... the second one is...is so.....*leaves a note*
    10/10 ^-^ keep up the good work PM me if you want to be friends ^^
     
    Hey sissy!!Ur poems are a hit!!^^
    I also cried with the second one...
    I cant wait for the next one sissy.
     
    Thanks and I think I already have another poem, and Kira Yamato I want 2 be your friend. Pm me sometime.
     
    Okaay!!Im looking forward 2 it....
     
    Sorry, my next poem's more about my favorite color....Purple....Sorry again.


    *Purple*

    As the wind comes through my hair
    I see a different shade of color...
    As the wind is known for being blue
    To me, it's a shade of purple.....

    Our eyes are supposed to see different colors
    My eyes choose to see only one..
    Only one color... purple..

    As I was young, I loved the color
    It was used in so many things:
    crayons, flowers, bowls
    There's so many shades of it...

    But the one thing I love the most
    Is the color I see in the wind
    Although the color exists in objects
    This I can only see...

    The wind suddenly becomes smooth and cool
    And changes from blue to purple..
    When it blows, it cries to me
    And then my heart becomes warm
    I become happy inside
    Because the wind cries to me
    As it's happy to see me....

    For as now, you should've known
    That my favorite color and thing is purple..
    For to me
    Purple's who I am......

    Maybe grammer errors..sorry..
     
    Its okay, its still really good.It expresses how much you love the color purple.
    You love it so much just as much as how I love pink....^^
     
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