DC's pokemon doodles

[dark charmander]

This is my new art thread as the other one isnt very good and hasent had a post since february so this is my new one.so anyway I would like people to coment on my drawings.
chimchar,munchlax,sunflora and digglet
totadile use water gun!
halloween charmander v2,dellkatty,shayminn sky forme
treeco
tochik and squirtle
terriermon (i know this isnt a pokemon)​

more soon

 

[ShinjisLover]

Well, since you seem to want reviews. Bad. I'll give you some.​

Spoiler:

chimchar,munchlax,sunflora and digglet

In this one, Chimchar's ear is shaped awkwardly. It seems too big, first of all. The fingers are misshapen, as are the feet. Also, the head is too circular; Chimchar's head is ovular.
Munchlax isn't fat enough and its right ear is way too big.
Sunflora is too fat and its petals are too small.
Diglett's nose seems to have a point in it.

totadile use water gun!

Totodile's arms are coming out of its chest and not out of the proper place. Its toes aren't round enough and its eye is too small as well. That Water Gun looks more like a Flamethrower. .

halloween charmander v2,dellkatty,shayminn sky forme

That Charmander looks cute (and I've seen it before, just in plush form), but its nose isn't rounded enough. I can't explain it very well, but Shaymin's Sky Forme's head is oddly shaped. I think it might be where the eye is placed. Delcatty's head is also oddly shaped, especially around the ears (though, the actual ears look fine). Delcatty's stomach comes out too far, making it look pregnant.

treeco

Treecko's legs are far too long.

As you can see in this:

Treecko's legs are short and stubby, making its torso look very long.

tochik and squirtle

Torchic's beak is too small and look more like lips. Its feet are also odd and seem too short. Torchic's toes are very long, normally. Squirtle's arms are too small and the coloring on both of them could use a lot of work. The coloring is just too scratchy; the colors need to be smoother.

terriermon (i know this isnt a pokemon)

Terriormon's body is too fat and big. The original Terriormon has a small body. Also, it's horn is too big and prominent. Its ears aren't big enough as well.

My review ^. What you need to work on is your anatomy and coloring. You color outside of the lines in all of your pictures. You have potential but you need a lot of practice.​

 

[dark charmander]

thank you for the tips ^^ the coloring in real life actually isn't actually all that bad its just that my scanner isn't the best. im trying to think of a better way to put them on the computer >.<

the halloween charmander isnt my own idea i just liked the picture so i decided to draw it