Do you see the Light? (My YGO Deck)

[Jeremy]

Well sweeties, I'm redoing my deck...Again. XD Anyway I'm entering the tournament, so I need a little help. Here's my deck.

Normal Monsters:
Mystical Elf X3
Neo the Magic Swordsman X2
Mystical Shine Ball
Spirit of the Harp
Blue-Eyes White Dragon

Effect Monsters:
Mirage Dragon X2
Maho Vailo X2
The Agent of Creation - Venus
Soul of Purity and Light
The Forgiving Maiden X2
Royal Magical Library
Magician of Faith X2
Shining Angel
Senju of the Thousand Hands
Jowgen the Spiritualist
Thunder Nyan Nyan
Servant of Catabolism
Moisture Creature
White Magician Pikeru

Ritual Monsters:
Paladin of White Dragon

Spell Cards:
Axe of Despair
Offerings to the Doomed
Book of Moon
Horn of Light
Swords of Revealing Light
Mystical Space Typhoon
Mage Power
White Dragon Ritual
Riryoku
Chorus of Santuary
Luminous Spark
Shield & Sword
Change of Heart
Nobleman of Crossout

Trap Cards:
Rope of Life
Waboku X2
Solar Ray X2
Gravity Bind
Magic Jammer
Gift of the Mystical Elf
Solemn Wishes
Ceasefire
Magic Cylinder
Negate Attack

Deck: 52 Cards

I see my deck is a mess. :P
Well this is what I've been trying to create

Normal Monsters: X3
Mystical Elf X3

Effect Monsters: X23
Mirage Dragon X2
Maho Vailo X2
Soul of Purity and Light X3
Magician of Faith X3
Thunder Nyan Nyan X3
Servant of Catabolism X3
Moisture Creature X3
White Magician Pikeru
Kiazer Seahorse X3

Spell Cards: X13
Axe of Despair X3
Book of Moon
Swords of Revealing Light
Mystical Space Typhoon
Mage Power
Luminous Spark X3
Change of Heart
Nobleman of Crossout X2

Trap Cards: X16
Rope of Life
Waboku X3
Solar Ray X3
Gravity Bind X3
Magic Jammer
Trap Jammer
Solemn Wishes
Ceasefire
Magic Cylinder
Negate Attack

Deck: 55 Cards

I'm aware that my Mystical Elf are gonna be weaken in defense, but they're my favorite cards. Also I'm trying to cut my deck down to a even 40, so can ya help me sweeties? ^^;

 

[MasterSimon]

well do u know what kind of decks will be in the meta?
that would help to know hwo to buidl the deck to be competitive in that situation...but just looking at it i can say lose some traps and monsters for some key spells to increase speed, increase flexability, and help in a control sector...