Do You Think Thid Umbreon is Good

[Pandoras Box]

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i made it for Latias Lover

 

[Bashaamo]

AAK! Pretty good.. a little scrapy but I really like the shading. It's like as if that umbreon had a dark side and a bright side =D

 

[Pandoras Box]

how could i make it less scrappy

here how about this 1

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[Draik]

Let's see..
-The JPEGness ruined the colour quality
-The wings are too streched.
-The neck has different outline colours
-To make it better, use different wings and recolour the head.

 

[Squeegee Beckenheim]

Don't double post. Just edit your previous post. The first one looks wierd, and the second looks cool

 

[Jirachi3]

the neck is weird on the second one and the first one is pretty good however!!!!:D

 

[Eig]

The first one is good. But the second is just WACKO... It makes me laugh for some reason...

 

[Pandoras Box]

ok ok check out this 1

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[Eig]

I think this is your best... sprite.... Really.

 

[Pandoras Box]

did i do all right on the shading and what not

 

[processr]

The last one is frankly much better than the first and second sprites.

 

[Pandoras Box]

so everything is good with it

 

[metabee14]

so everything is good with it

Yes, there is nothing wrong with it.
I did see some wierd greenish pixels on the wings but it looks good.
Maybe giving him arodactyle's colors to make him even better?