DP to FRLG

[|Maximus|]

I plan to make DP sprites into FRLG sprites.

Here are some.

Overworlds(starters which are unfinished):

Male Overworld:

C&C I plan to make many more!

 

[Anastasia.R]

The first set is a bit odd looking with Piplup. The head is a bit too big. :P The overworld of Lucus is pretty good, but not much. I'll come back to see more.

~A.R​

 

[Jake]

The Pokémon OW's look...not so great. Turtwig's stomach sticks out the same length than it's legs, and it shouldn't be seen. Grotle looks like it's laying down and what's with the bug eyes? Chimchar is un-even and it seems like its head is shifted to the left, and you have to squint very hard to see its eyes, you want to be able to make out the face clearly. Piplup's body span is only 4 or 5 pixels wide, but the head is huge, you want to keep things even, once again.
The trainer is an obvious edit and it looks like he's missing his eyebrows. The beret on the front sprite is to square and you can still see the bill of what once was a hat, the side sprites are decent, probably the best you have, but the top of the hat is to straight. The back sprites are edits of Red, and I don't even know if it's been editted. To hole in the hat shouldn't be there (it's a beret.)
Turtwig - 5/10
Grotle - 3/10
Chimchar - 3/10
Piplup - 1/10
Diamond - 4/10

 

[doesn't matter]

axibar, just as a word of warning, you should separate your sprites so that people don't think that they're one sheet instead of separate examples.

I really need to rewrite the rules ._.

 

[|Maximus|]

Well I am not that god of a spriter and I thought by doing this would help me improve.

 

[|Maximus|]

No you can not use any of these sprites!

 

[Bulletangel]

I like the torrera sprite ^_^​

 

[|Maximus|]

There is no torrterra sprite. It's grotle!

 

[Opacus]

Well I am not that god of a spriter and I thought by doing this would help me improve.

You want to improve? Well that's exactly what the guy is tryin to help ya with.
Don't ignore his critique! If you do not read critique or learn from your mistakes you will never improve!

 

[|Maximus|]

I know, I wasn't ignoring it. I stink at pokemon overworlds from scratch , but I do somewhat good at trainer overworlds.

 

[doesn't matter]

Since you've already gone ahead and created another thread, I'm just gonna go and close this one due to your request.

Why you didn't just continue your spriting endeavours in this one, I have no idea :<

locked​