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W??d?r?ng?W?rd?W??v?r
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- Crossing the plains between Oore and the other lan
- Seen May 26, 2004
Congratulations. Your one step closer to reading the best fan fiction i have ever written. Its still under construction since its a rather large project of mine. Its a simple story, and a complex one in some aspects. Regardless, its a nice read. I hope you like it half as much as i enjoyed writing it.
Comments are welcome, particularly critism since i havent had ANY yet. There must be something wrong with this fiction.
if not... then *Shrugs* just as well. I spent a long time writing this. No further delays... heres the first couple of chapters of the first installment of Dragonagi.
Dragonagi
Chapter 1 : Disturbances
The hype about his past and scrutiny about his appointment as 'Blue Dragon Knight' at such an early age hardly stirred a reaction from Valthor. His rank was irrelevant. He cared not for how he was perceived but how he was remembered in the times to come. 'Titles don't mean anything' he'd tell himself. 'Its pokemon who work so hard and earn the praise that's given to me'. Heh…as if his pokemon didn't know. They knew how unfair he was being to himself.
He strolled the hallways, his loyal dark blue and black pokemon in tow, on his way to rest his mind and body after a tough, and by Dragonagi Light's standards, surprisingly physical examination. He wore the traditional Dragonagi garb. When Valthor went out on missions he preferred to wear the fitted white uniform of the Dragonagi with his rank subtly sewn on the left wrist of his long white sleeve. His hair was a short black with dark blue flecks and splotches to represent his love for his favorite pokemon.
The obstacle course had evidently been upgraded for his skills test. He was used to these little adjustments on his behalf and adapted accordingly. He passed a somber looking high ranked agent who greeted him excitedly as he walked.
"Hey, Valthor. I was in the Viewing Station during that last test. Unbelievably cool work in there! I hope I get to work under you one day. Keep that kind of foresight up and you'll be able to stop saluting me and all the other asses in here who think they've earned their stripes the hard way." He was jesting of course. No one earned anything in Dragonagi unless they worked their asses off. You have to make 'Pokemon Master' status before they start to even consider you as a potential recruit to undergo training as an 'Agent' in the Dragonagi Light Organization.
Looking back on it, Valthor seemed to recall his days of freelance training and random battling as his easiest. Each and every 'agent' in Dragonagi Light was a well-oiled pokemon battling machine once they finish their initiation. And most go on to greater things within the Agency. Much greater. Dragonagi is all about evolving and self-improving and it always allows its agents this opportunity.
Valthor settled down on his well-kept bed and dwelled on his first life. His past life. He remembered his upbringing on the farm in Gedyn all those years ago. A terrific way to grow and learn life's little ups and downs. His parents were successful but humble farmers, always teaching him the values and morals of an honorable and fulfilling lifestyle. It wasn't until he was five that he received his very first pokemon. A puppy Houndour. And not just that, a very special Houndour. Classed as a shiny specimen, because where its beautiful short black and red striped coat should have been there was instead a series of dark marine blue stripes. Beautiful to look at.
One day while walking through the surrounding hills, the adventurous boy came across a terrifying and particularly menacing Pinsir intent on doing harm. His valiant pokemon bounded between the foe and his master and roared his defiance with the ferocity of one that has everything to lose. The bug type pokemon did not feel like dying that day and fled before he was roasted and toasted. From that day on the houndours endless courage earned him the name Valor.
'Heh… and how would that Pinsir fare now I wonder?' Valthor thought as he recalled his first meeting with Dragonagi Light. It was shortly after he'd defeated the Elite four and Lance four years ago. No one who battled himself and Valor walked away without a burn. It was a fun time… but he always needed more challenges in his life. He easily dispensed with the Elite four and was quickly acknowledged by the Agency. They had watched him closely over the past few weeks at that time of his life. They had no restrictions on age. It was strictly skills based assessment only and Valthor had more than they had ever seen before.
He was eighteen now and so far the youngest ever Agent to make it this far up the rankings and make it look so easy but back then the world was his battle dojo. He was a largish man now, about six feet tall and athletic in build. He was naturally athletic, but if he weren't, then the regime in the Agency would quickly make him so. It was a physically demanding lifestyle.
He remembered how he was approached by Lance after his victory ceremony in the Pokemon League. One by one he beat the Elite four to a pulp and then valiantly defeated the charismatic and entertaining Lance. The swarming media entered with blinding flashes and annoying microphones. Then life developed into a confusing couple of years. First of all, the reporters and photographers had some how been distracted by a beautiful young trainer (who he had every intention of talking to, she was very hot) tripping over and twisting her ankle directly in front of the gathered news people. As he dwelled on how beautifully black and long her hair was, Lance pulled him to one side as the camera crews and reporters had their backs turned. He thrust a rolled up scroll into the bewildered trainers' pack and whispered privately in his ear...
"Take this and show no-one. Trust nothing until you complete the instructions in here. Delay not and good luck. I won't see you again for a long time, Brad, but you will have to greet me when you see me again." Of course none of it made sense then. But as he followed the instructions precisely and without delay he was quickly beginning to open his eyes to some of the possibilities.
With the 'D' neat and boldly painted on his hotel window in the slimy white paint the instructions suggested he use, he waited and waited then waited some more for something to occur. Then as he sat down on his bed staring at the bland and boring artwork he'd produced, his eye caught something dark directly next to him. He attempted to jump and stand up to this unexpected challenge but before he could flinch, the assailant was upon him and had him pinned in a fluid and skilled motion. It was the girl with the beautiful jet-black hair. She was dressed in a completely black fitted uniform now. He noted six pokeballs strung neatly in small black pouches along her left thigh and how compact her ninja jumpsuit was clinging to her body complimentary to her figure.
"My name is Larissa. If you want to truly live the rest of your life as a pokemon trainer then you will remain silent for the duration of what I have to say." She sounded so serious and so deadly to him, a tone that matched her ninja like d?cor. She seemed like the kind of person who knew how to handle herself. He dared not even breathe loudly during the short, informative speech she had to give him. Not after that opening. They were directions of course. She said she was to escort him to something she kept on referring to as his "opportunity for a real challenge". How intriguing it was for him. Could this be something he couldn't achieve? It seemed so…. deep and serious.
Whatever it was, he felt it wouldn't beat him. It couldn't. He would ride this unexpected wave until it broke as waves always did in the end. Well he'd been riding this particular wave for over four years and it only grew with every breath he took. The Dragonagi Light Agency was a wander to behold when he first entered its secret halls and hi tech ways. 'How could something so big, so important be so easily concealed?' he remembered asking himself when he first arrived along with about thirty other fresh raw recruits. Everything there was futuristic and hard. It was not a dwelling of comfort, but of efficiency, economy and above all, tradition. There must have been billions of Gedyn dollars invested in this place. Dragonagi Light was an organization designed centuries ago, when pokemon were first discovered and evil was first sensed, stirring about and scheming ways of harming our beloved Pocket Monsters. It exists to protect and serve pokemon in any way and every way it can. But to do this effectively, it remains a secret to this day.
He recalled how amazed he was at being one of the three recruits successful in passing the five days of initiation examinations out of the thirty who began them. One of the other passing trainers was his very best friend and most trusted source on Kanto, Johto and Houen celebrities, Miguel, who will be explained later. He's very cool, believe me.
Valthor woke early that morning and dwelt on more recent events, about two years later to this present. The past few days had been a little inconsistent with what he'd been used to. Two days ago he was training (and leading the class by far) for a 'Reconnaissance; level 5' badge, the highest level achievable. When midway through the final practical exercise a veteran agent stopped proceedings to ask the instructor if he could take Valthor to be briefed on a 'mission' back at the main compound. It couldn't wait?! Three more minutes and the badge was his! How annoying.
He was taken to a briefing room where he found several other trainers including Miguel and a few others. He was particularly knowledgeable about them due to their reputation as the top percentage of young agents. They were seated sporadically and looking as annoyed as he felt about their studies being interrupted. He noted the two things all ten trainers in the room had in common straight away. All were young and all were very lethal in the field. It was rare to have them all in the same place at the same time this way. Miguel greeted Valthor and bade him to sit next to him for the up-coming news or whatever was coming. Valthor was relieved a friend was here too.
chapterrrr 2, just a few inches lower...
Comments are welcome, particularly critism since i havent had ANY yet. There must be something wrong with this fiction.
if not... then *Shrugs* just as well. I spent a long time writing this. No further delays... heres the first couple of chapters of the first installment of Dragonagi.
Dragonagi
Chapter 1 : Disturbances
The hype about his past and scrutiny about his appointment as 'Blue Dragon Knight' at such an early age hardly stirred a reaction from Valthor. His rank was irrelevant. He cared not for how he was perceived but how he was remembered in the times to come. 'Titles don't mean anything' he'd tell himself. 'Its pokemon who work so hard and earn the praise that's given to me'. Heh…as if his pokemon didn't know. They knew how unfair he was being to himself.
He strolled the hallways, his loyal dark blue and black pokemon in tow, on his way to rest his mind and body after a tough, and by Dragonagi Light's standards, surprisingly physical examination. He wore the traditional Dragonagi garb. When Valthor went out on missions he preferred to wear the fitted white uniform of the Dragonagi with his rank subtly sewn on the left wrist of his long white sleeve. His hair was a short black with dark blue flecks and splotches to represent his love for his favorite pokemon.
The obstacle course had evidently been upgraded for his skills test. He was used to these little adjustments on his behalf and adapted accordingly. He passed a somber looking high ranked agent who greeted him excitedly as he walked.
"Hey, Valthor. I was in the Viewing Station during that last test. Unbelievably cool work in there! I hope I get to work under you one day. Keep that kind of foresight up and you'll be able to stop saluting me and all the other asses in here who think they've earned their stripes the hard way." He was jesting of course. No one earned anything in Dragonagi unless they worked their asses off. You have to make 'Pokemon Master' status before they start to even consider you as a potential recruit to undergo training as an 'Agent' in the Dragonagi Light Organization.
Looking back on it, Valthor seemed to recall his days of freelance training and random battling as his easiest. Each and every 'agent' in Dragonagi Light was a well-oiled pokemon battling machine once they finish their initiation. And most go on to greater things within the Agency. Much greater. Dragonagi is all about evolving and self-improving and it always allows its agents this opportunity.
Valthor settled down on his well-kept bed and dwelled on his first life. His past life. He remembered his upbringing on the farm in Gedyn all those years ago. A terrific way to grow and learn life's little ups and downs. His parents were successful but humble farmers, always teaching him the values and morals of an honorable and fulfilling lifestyle. It wasn't until he was five that he received his very first pokemon. A puppy Houndour. And not just that, a very special Houndour. Classed as a shiny specimen, because where its beautiful short black and red striped coat should have been there was instead a series of dark marine blue stripes. Beautiful to look at.
One day while walking through the surrounding hills, the adventurous boy came across a terrifying and particularly menacing Pinsir intent on doing harm. His valiant pokemon bounded between the foe and his master and roared his defiance with the ferocity of one that has everything to lose. The bug type pokemon did not feel like dying that day and fled before he was roasted and toasted. From that day on the houndours endless courage earned him the name Valor.
'Heh… and how would that Pinsir fare now I wonder?' Valthor thought as he recalled his first meeting with Dragonagi Light. It was shortly after he'd defeated the Elite four and Lance four years ago. No one who battled himself and Valor walked away without a burn. It was a fun time… but he always needed more challenges in his life. He easily dispensed with the Elite four and was quickly acknowledged by the Agency. They had watched him closely over the past few weeks at that time of his life. They had no restrictions on age. It was strictly skills based assessment only and Valthor had more than they had ever seen before.
He was eighteen now and so far the youngest ever Agent to make it this far up the rankings and make it look so easy but back then the world was his battle dojo. He was a largish man now, about six feet tall and athletic in build. He was naturally athletic, but if he weren't, then the regime in the Agency would quickly make him so. It was a physically demanding lifestyle.
He remembered how he was approached by Lance after his victory ceremony in the Pokemon League. One by one he beat the Elite four to a pulp and then valiantly defeated the charismatic and entertaining Lance. The swarming media entered with blinding flashes and annoying microphones. Then life developed into a confusing couple of years. First of all, the reporters and photographers had some how been distracted by a beautiful young trainer (who he had every intention of talking to, she was very hot) tripping over and twisting her ankle directly in front of the gathered news people. As he dwelled on how beautifully black and long her hair was, Lance pulled him to one side as the camera crews and reporters had their backs turned. He thrust a rolled up scroll into the bewildered trainers' pack and whispered privately in his ear...
"Take this and show no-one. Trust nothing until you complete the instructions in here. Delay not and good luck. I won't see you again for a long time, Brad, but you will have to greet me when you see me again." Of course none of it made sense then. But as he followed the instructions precisely and without delay he was quickly beginning to open his eyes to some of the possibilities.
With the 'D' neat and boldly painted on his hotel window in the slimy white paint the instructions suggested he use, he waited and waited then waited some more for something to occur. Then as he sat down on his bed staring at the bland and boring artwork he'd produced, his eye caught something dark directly next to him. He attempted to jump and stand up to this unexpected challenge but before he could flinch, the assailant was upon him and had him pinned in a fluid and skilled motion. It was the girl with the beautiful jet-black hair. She was dressed in a completely black fitted uniform now. He noted six pokeballs strung neatly in small black pouches along her left thigh and how compact her ninja jumpsuit was clinging to her body complimentary to her figure.
"My name is Larissa. If you want to truly live the rest of your life as a pokemon trainer then you will remain silent for the duration of what I have to say." She sounded so serious and so deadly to him, a tone that matched her ninja like d?cor. She seemed like the kind of person who knew how to handle herself. He dared not even breathe loudly during the short, informative speech she had to give him. Not after that opening. They were directions of course. She said she was to escort him to something she kept on referring to as his "opportunity for a real challenge". How intriguing it was for him. Could this be something he couldn't achieve? It seemed so…. deep and serious.
Whatever it was, he felt it wouldn't beat him. It couldn't. He would ride this unexpected wave until it broke as waves always did in the end. Well he'd been riding this particular wave for over four years and it only grew with every breath he took. The Dragonagi Light Agency was a wander to behold when he first entered its secret halls and hi tech ways. 'How could something so big, so important be so easily concealed?' he remembered asking himself when he first arrived along with about thirty other fresh raw recruits. Everything there was futuristic and hard. It was not a dwelling of comfort, but of efficiency, economy and above all, tradition. There must have been billions of Gedyn dollars invested in this place. Dragonagi Light was an organization designed centuries ago, when pokemon were first discovered and evil was first sensed, stirring about and scheming ways of harming our beloved Pocket Monsters. It exists to protect and serve pokemon in any way and every way it can. But to do this effectively, it remains a secret to this day.
He recalled how amazed he was at being one of the three recruits successful in passing the five days of initiation examinations out of the thirty who began them. One of the other passing trainers was his very best friend and most trusted source on Kanto, Johto and Houen celebrities, Miguel, who will be explained later. He's very cool, believe me.
Valthor woke early that morning and dwelt on more recent events, about two years later to this present. The past few days had been a little inconsistent with what he'd been used to. Two days ago he was training (and leading the class by far) for a 'Reconnaissance; level 5' badge, the highest level achievable. When midway through the final practical exercise a veteran agent stopped proceedings to ask the instructor if he could take Valthor to be briefed on a 'mission' back at the main compound. It couldn't wait?! Three more minutes and the badge was his! How annoying.
He was taken to a briefing room where he found several other trainers including Miguel and a few others. He was particularly knowledgeable about them due to their reputation as the top percentage of young agents. They were seated sporadically and looking as annoyed as he felt about their studies being interrupted. He noted the two things all ten trainers in the room had in common straight away. All were young and all were very lethal in the field. It was rare to have them all in the same place at the same time this way. Miguel greeted Valthor and bade him to sit next to him for the up-coming news or whatever was coming. Valthor was relieved a friend was here too.
chapterrrr 2, just a few inches lower...