Dutchies Galleries

[{Swan}]

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Since I've been doing more artwork, I thought I'd share with you guys ^^

most of this has been done for Contests on DA because I've been big on that lately. Just so you know, this is non-Pokemon related because I'm still working on my creature-skills.

Liquid Stallions
Cat-girl coloured for a colouring contest
Diana's Panel
Selene's Panel
All Panels
Princess Izka
Mr. Sora

I am still working on the Sailor Moon contest's Panels, almost done with the seventh one now, although those in between still need working.

Comments are loved, both on my DA page and here <3

 

[ShinjisLover]

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Liquid Stallions
Very nicely done. Except the face has no defined structure, especially around where the cheekbones should be.

Cat-girl coloured for a colouring contest
The coloring job is fabulous, especially around the cat ears and tail. However, just in case you drew it as well, I have to say that the hand holding the wine glass appears to have no wrist. *never reads deviantART descriptions*

Diana's Panel
Lovely. The coloring flows perfectly. However, the arms are a bit too skinny and bony and the hands appear to be just a tad too small. Also, the chin comes out to a point. An easy way to make sure the chin doesn't come to a point is to make the jaw line somewhat straight.

Selene's Panel
This one is also a good drawing, but the hands are definitely too small. Really, though, that's the only thing wrong with it.

All Panels
The face in the third panel is too flat. And the girl in the last panel has a head that's way too big for her body. The rest of them are very nice.

Princess Izka
Coloring in the lip makes it look less attractive; however, the rest of it is wonderful. I really love the way you colored this one.

Mr. Sora
I'm not digging how you made the face. The eyes are spaced too far apart, for one, making the face look bigger than it actually is. Also the hair is too short. Sora's hair is a lot longer (and somehow defies gravity. XDD). But I have to give you props: The butt is perfect. XDD

My review ^.

Hope my review helps! ^^​

 

[{Swan}]

Thanks for the review ^^

I laughed at Sora's butt part xD You gotta admit, it's the most important part right. And I'm the first one to say his head is messed up, it's in the comments.
Liquid Stallions isn't supposed to have a face structure, just a style I've been messing with and I didn't draw the cat girl, that's all.

Either way, I'll try to take this too heart, thanks ^^

 

[Phanima]

Just picking up on what SL said and from I've seen in Liquid Stallions and Mr. Sora, the main issue I find with the characters' faces is that there's no depth in their features. Their eyes seem flat, which I think you've drawn so that they're detailed but as a result, make them come off at an odd angle. Also, the hair in Cat-girl seems a little flat also. Maybe add a few layers and defined strands to give it a bit more depth.

Everything otherwise is really well done, especially the colouring of Princess Izka. It's personally my favourite. :3

 

[{Swan}]

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These were made for a contest. Yes, I know his head is too big and his hands are ugly. I do like her though.

 

[{Swan}]

full sailor moon contest entry:

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Another contest entry (Please do not comment on his face >> )

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And my most recent drawing, done today:

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[Underoos]

Hey, I helped you pick that girl in the bottom! XD Your stuff looks good though ^^

 

[Randydrew66]

I liked them all, much better than anything I ever did

 

[{Swan}]

Thanks both of you =] And Randy, practice makes perfect.

Anyway here's the latest bunch:

Bug-headed Anastasia I just felt like drawing ^^

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A picture of my OC Ivory, I really like this one =]

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Ariel, there's something wrong with her face, but oh well ^^

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Someone else's lineart that I coloured

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And an art trade

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[Anastasia.R]

Oh my god, it's Anastasia! =D
Cute way of making her hair shiny. =3 And with the rest of the pictures. The 2nd picture bugs me with one of the arm for some reason, but that could be me. XD
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