EX: Ancient Menaces

[Mail Jeevas]

Well, I'm posting my new set, that consist of 60 cards. Here is the "intro" X3

In an ancient period of time... There were some pokemons too strong that were able to break the sky with their screams, and crate tidal waves with their strenght... They were sealed away to stop them before they distroyed our world... Now the seal has weaken and they are free again!!!

1/60: Breaff
https://img130.imageshack.us/img130/7040/breaff6mf.png
2/60: Feileng
https://img57.imageshack.us/img57/5707/feileng9gd.png
3/60: Renalo
https://img57.imageshack.us/img57/5290/renalo8vf.png
4/60: Anfyx
https://img57.imageshack.us/img57/6587/anfyx7cq.png
5/60: Deoxys*
https://img57.imageshack.us/img57/6522/deoxysshiny3iw.png
6/60: Entei EX:
https://img89.imageshack.us/img89/5112/enteiex5td.png
7/60: Entei*
https://img20.imageshack.us/img20/4721/enteishiny5wq.png
8/60: Articuno
https://img335.imageshack.us/img335/5266/articuno7tl.png
9/60: Crocks
https://img145.imageshack.us/img145/5108/crocks0ui.png
10/60: Crocksaar
https://img68.imageshack.us/img68/7384/crocksaar1ho.png
11/60: Dark Feraligatr
https://img430.imageshack.us/img430/9818/feraligatrdarkcopy8yq.png


ELGONZO!!!

PS: If anyone wants a card t be done, I'll make it ;). Also, If anyone wants to give me an advice or an idea for my set, I'll accept it (Or not...)

LOL!

 

[QFred]

Some of your cards aren't that good.

You have the resources, you dominate the placement. Now, it's timw for you to improve the pics you use, the look of the card, the attacks and the wording.

 

[~*!*~Tatsujin Gosuto~*!*~]

Well I like your EX Entei and Deoxys the most. I like how for your last card you put a nice background on it.

:t094:~*!*~Queen Boo~*!*~

 

[Mail Jeevas]

You know what QFred, I must say that I really agree with you, even if someone doesn't believe me. I've been learning how to draw manga and anime (They are basically the same, I think), so very soon everyone will be seeing cards that are drawn by me.
A lil question, What do you mean by "the look of the card, the attacks and the wording"?

ELGONZO!!!

PS: The "Here, there and everywhere" thing is a song from the beatles, right? (It has the same name)

 

[Latios Legend]

Some are really nice cards,but I'm not favored of the made-up ones,no offence.You made a mistake for the last card.It says Feraligatr on the card.Isn't it supposed to be Dark Feraligatr?They are really nice ones,keep up the nice work!

 

[QFred]

The attacks you put are very basic, not developted and stuff like that. You should make effective attacks and cool PokéPowers and PokéBodies.

Also, the attacks on your cards aren't very well organized, they need (apart of a better wording and effect) tro be placed in a space using way.

The wording of some of your attacks, even if respects grammar and ortography, isn't always TCG typed written.

I hope I made myself clear...

 

[Mail Jeevas]

Yeah, I understood you QFred, but I really need someone to help me with some of my cards. Would you like to help me QFred? Puhlease?


ELGONZO!!!

 

[QFred]

I can't right now, cause I need to study a lot and, on my freetimes, I make Exorsus cards.

 

[pencilbuddy]

all cards get a garnd total of 9.7 out of 10 because of types pics and attacks and articuno if my favorite pokemon

 

[Gokey Shuckle]

....

They are beautiful cards, but why are the energy symbols choppy? Try making your own art too. Even if it sucks, it would show some originality and originality is important. 9/10 for the whole set.

 

[Mail Jeevas]

Thanks everyone for their comments, Now I have a printer and a scanner, so expect to see some of my art soon, if it's not today ;) *wink* *wink*

ELGONZO!!!

PS: Any suggestions?

 

[Mail Jeevas]

Hey I made the art! Its a new pokemon, called Raizen. I really need to be taught some darkening techinques -.-;

Here it is:
https://img443.imageshack.us/my.php?image=raizencopy0hx.png


ELGONZO!!!