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Ex:DNA

Aggron_Tamer

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    • Seen Jan 10, 2008
    This is just the ex's from the set, I haven't made a full card list, as of yet :

    Name : Claydol ex (img : *image removed* )
    HP : 150
    Type : Psychic
    Pokebody/power : None
    Moves :

    PP Cosmic Power
    Does 10 damage to all of your opponents pokemon, on your next turn, prevent an amount of damage on claydol equal to the amount of damage inflicted on your opponents pokemon.

    PPC Super Psy 50

    Weakness : G
    Resistance :
    Retreat : CC



    Name : Seviper ex (img : *image removed* )
    HP : 100
    Type : Grass
    Pokebody/power : None
    Moves :

    GGG Lethal Sting 30
    The defending pokemon is now poisoned, Put 3 damage counters on it between turns instead of 1.

    GC Bite 40

    Weakness : P
    Resistance :
    Retreat : C



    Name : Zangoose ex
    HP : 90
    Type : Normal
    Pokebody/power : Poson Resistance (Can't be poisoned)
    Moves :

    CC Slash 50

    CCC Double Team 30
    Zangoose cannot be hurt by any attack from stage 1 or stage 2 evolutions on the next turn.

    Weakness : F
    Resistance : P
    Retreat :



    Name : Jolteon ex
    HP : 120
    Type : Electric
    Pokebody/power : Charge Voltage (Add 10 damage to each of jolteon ex's moves for every L energy attached to it.)
    Moves :

    TCC Thunder 30

    TTTC Thunderbolt 90
    Discard 2 basic energies attached to jolteon

    Weakness : F
    Resistance :
    Retreat :


    Name : Vaporeon ex
    HP : 110
    Type : Water
    Pokebody/power : Acid Armour (Each turn you may flip 2 coins, if both are heads, Vaporeon ex may not be affected by any effects of attacks, including damage done to it by your opponents active pokemon)
    Moves :

    W Bubblebeam 30

    WWW Hydro Pump 60+
    Does 60 damage plus 10 more damage for each W energy attached to Vaporeon.

    Weakness : E
    Resistance :
    Retreat : C


    Name : Flareon Ex
    HP : 100
    Type : Fire
    Pokebody/power : Furnace (All energy attached to flareon ex counts as F energy)
    Moves :

    F Ember 30

    FFF Fire Blast 150
    Discard 2 F energy attached to Flareon ex

    Weakness : W
    Resistance : G
    Retreat : CC


    Name : Breloom ex
    HP : 160
    Type : Grass
    Pokebody/power : Trip Up (If an attack does damage equal to more than half of Brelooms remaining hp, then you may place 3 damage counters on the Opponents active pokemon)
    Moves :

    F Mach Punch 20

    GG Mega Drain 40
    Remove 4 damage counters from Breloom ex

    FFFG Root Punch 120
    Place 2 damage counters on Breloom ex.

    Weakness : P
    Resistance : E
    Retreat : C

    Name : Grumpig ex (img : *image removed* )
    HP : 100
    Type : Psychic
    Pokebody/power : Damage Control (see card)
    Moves : (see card)
    Weakness : G
    Resistance :
    Retreat : CC
     
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    All are great, but on the Claydol, u put a sentence twice in a row.
     
    Claydol ex repeats a setence at Cosmic Power, and Seviper ex energy positioning is just wrong... And Lethal Sting description should be: "The Defending Pok?mon is now Poisoned. Put 3 damage counters on it between turns, instead of 1. (Even if the Defending Pok?mon was already Poisoned.)"

    Anyway, 5/10
     
    Text placement is pretty off on the two of them. The Seviper image is kinda just cut and pasted in. The Claydol is pretty awesome save the text fudging.
    Not bad/awesome
     
    ummm......the seviper and grumpig are wrong.....the energy placement is way off
     
    Sorry if I sound rude...But....Not very good...I believe you can do better!

    Artwork - 6/10
    Attacks - 5/10
    HP - 8/10 (Very good.)
    Retreat costs - 8/10
    Resistance - 8/10 (Jolteon is Resistant to Metal ;))
    Weakness - 8/10
    Set symbol - 0/10 (I beleive this is important)
    Card number - 0/10 (I also believe this is important)
    Illistartor name - 0/10 ( Looks like you didn't bother with that...It's also important! With out it, some one can claim the cards as their own!!)
    Creativity - 10/10 (You're very creative! I like that.)

    Over all rating - 6/10 (Creatve, yet, somethings are missing, that really make up a good fake card! Keep up the good work, though!)

    In all - 59/110 D+ You can do better than that! Work hard!! Believe in yourself!!

    Would love to see my favorite of those - Jolteon EX!!
     
    Indeed. Add Illus. to Seviper please, if you don't know the illustrator, don't use the art. Thats my motto. If you don't give them credit, you are technically "stealing" there art. Please put the illus. immediately.

    Overall: 7/10 ~ Mistakes have been pointed out and such.
     
    o.0
    Tch. Well that's a lotta work, I must commend ya for it. 10/10 ^_^
     
    on Grumpig- you always have the attacks in energy order, effect text looks bold
    on Seviper ex- illus. and placement has been menchuned.
    on Claydol ex- the name isn't 1 pixel to the right, the reatreat is over to the left by a few pixels, the picture overlaps the stage one circle, and finally the illus hasn't been moved 5 pixels left.
    The ideas
    the ideas are over all very good. Just use the symbole sheet!
     
    Claydoll 8/10
    I like ilustaction but the first attack is kinda weird...
    Seviper 6/10
    Ilustraction isn't so good and an attack like that can't exist...
    Crumpig 5/10
    Poor illus and generally I don't like the card...
     
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