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EX: Frontier Challenge - A fake set by Smarties-kun

Smarties-chan

Should've had that name change
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    It's been a while since I last posted a fake card here and I have improved quite a lot since then. I'm basicaly just making cards of my Battle Frontier team in Emerald.

    The following cards are going to be in the set:

    1 - Smarties' Sceptile
    2 - Smarties' Starmie
    3 - Smarties' Swampert EX
    4 - Smarties' Machamp EX
    5 - Smarties' Seviper
    6 - Smarties' Dodrio
    7 - Smarties' Charizard
    8 - Smarties' Dugtrio
    9 - Smarties' Electabuzz
    10 - Smarties' Lapras EX
    11 - Smarties' Primeape
    12 - Smarties' Crobat
    13 - Smarties' Vaporeon (thanks to Aragornbird for the awesome art on this one _^^)
    Sceptile EX (promo)
    *edit* I have quite a lot of wording errors on Dodrio and they will be fixed at some point.
    *edit2* Darn, I fixed the placement errors on Machamp before posting this thread, but I forgot to save it >D Expect the Machamp to be fixed soon.
    *edit3* I fixed the errors on Smarties' Dodrio and Smarties' Machamp EX and added Smarties' Vaporeon
     
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    O.o

    As shown by edit text, Your Dodrio's really need some help there:

    1.) You can't make cards with card effects that exceed the text background of the blank. Ways to avoid this is to change the effect of the Power/attack or Changing the sizes of the effects until they fit. But changing the text is better in this situation.

    2.) Let me read the power's effect:

    Err hemm... "Once during your turn (before you attack), you may look at the top three cards of your deck. If any of them have SMARTIES' in their name, show them to your opponent, and put those cards in your hand. Shuffle your deck afterward. This power can't be used if SMARTIES Dodrio is affected by a Special Condition."

    ^ Edit the parts in bold.

    3.) There is a small problem with the pic. There's a small white area on the upper left portion of the pic border in the blank.

    Those are its errors. Your Vaporeon card's resistance symbols are overlapping and it's name is BIG.. and I don't really have problems with your Machamp except about the white bit on the upper left of the pic background.

    The thing is, you should raise the text sizes of the card effects. People might have trouble reading it.

    Rate:
    Machamp EX = 9/10
    Vaporeon = 8/10
    Dodrio = 5/10 <_<

    Regards. :)
     
    Thanks for the review ^_^ I will fix all the things you mentioned, however, if I make the text any bigger, it will take up too much space <.<
    I just realized I used the wrong font for Vaporeon's name >D
    As I said before, I will be fixing these cards shortly.
     
    Hi, Smarties, great to see you here!^^

    A thingie I noticed is that the placement is not the best, and the fonts on Vaporeon are wierd...

    But they are great!^^
     
    Fonts are weird. I don't think it is necessary to type "SMARTIE'S" like that. "Smartie's" is more appropriate. All other mstakes have been pointed out. Keep doing your best. 7/10 for what I have seen so far.
     
    Fonts are weird. I don't think it is necessary to type "SMARTIE'S" like that. "Smartie's" is more appropriate. All other mstakes have been pointed out. Keep doing your best. 7/10 for what I have seen so far.
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    Well... the tutorial sayed the name should be completely capitalized, so I capitalized ''Smarties''.
    Hi, Smarties, great to see you here!^^

    A thingie I noticed is that the placement is not the best, and the fonts on Vaporeon are wierd...

    But they are great!^^
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    The placement is weird? :S I followed the tutorial completely.
    And yes, I am aware of the problems on Vaporeon. I was in a lazy mood when I made it <.<
     
    Its kind of weird how you put your name in a Pokebody?. Well I like the disign of the card. So for all 3 of your cards I give you a 6/10

    :t093:~*!*~Queen Boo~*!*~
     
    yea kinda cool kinda weird i like vaporeon i give 7/10
     
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