Fateful Love

[Midnight Moon~]

I really love poems, I find them so...soothing, and beautiful. Here's another one that I wrote. I'd love any suggestions that anyone has that could make my writing better.

Fateful Love

We talk, we laugh, we get along great;
Us being together? It's known simply as fate.
But as all lovers know, it's love's curse to pass;
We can pray, we can fight, for our love to last.

Your the air that I breathe;
Yours is the beauty I see.
Thoughts of you are the thoughts which I think;
Yours is the water of life that I drink.

Life's empty promises mean little to me;
Except being with you, that's my destiny.
I don't fear death, it's hard but it's true;
The only thing I fear - living life without you.

 

[TJgamer]

It's always wonderful to find another person with a great taste for poetry.
Your poem was excellent! I really enjoyed reading it.
Who knows? Keep practicing and you could be a phenomenon some day.

 

[Midnight Moon~]

Thank you(: I'm practicing a lot, hopefully someday people will know my poems. That's my dream, anyways. I have a long, long way to go, but it doesn't matter, I'll get there someday.