First competition team, need ratings/critiques

[Alex_]

I'm as new as it gets to competitive battling, EV's, natures etc. I'm thinking of making this team to use against friends and possibly online. This is what I have so far...

Heracross

Adamant Nature
Evs: 252 Attack/252 Speed/4 HP
Trait: Guts
Item: Choice Scarf

-Megahorn
-Close Combat
-Stone Edge
-Earthquake

Snorlax

Quiet Nature
Evs: 255 HP/255 Special Defense
Trait: Thick Fat
Item: Leftovers

-Yawn
-Psychic
-Counter
-Protect

Gengar

Hasty Nature
Evs: 255 speed/ 255 special attack
Trait: Levitate
Item: Leftovers

-Focus Punch
-Thunderbolt
-Psychic
-Shadow Ball

Alakazam

Naïve Nature
Evs: 252 speed/200 Sp. Attack/ 58 HP
Trait: Sychronize
Item: ???

-Disable
-Psychic
-Shadow Ball
-Focus Blast

Vaporeon

Quiet Nature
Evs: 252 HP/ 156 Sp. Attack/ 102 Def.
Trait: Water Absorb
Item: Leftovers

-Aqua Ring
-Ice Beam
-Dig
-Surf

Sceptile

Hasty Nature
Evs: 252 Speed/ 156 Attack/ 102 Sp. Attack
Trait: Overgrow

-Rock Slide
-Leaf Storm
-Grasswhistle
-Brick Break

...and that's it. Let me know what I can change.

 

[R.A.M.]

I'm as new as it gets to competitive battling, EV's, natures etc. I'm thinking of making this team to use against friends and possibly online. This is what I have so far...

Heracross

Adamant Nature
Evs: 252 Attack/252 Speed/4 HP
Trait: Guts
Item: Muscle Band
-Megahorn
-Close Combat
-Megahorn(for those Psychic Pokemon)
-Earthquake

Snorlax

Adamant Nature
Evs: 255 HP/255 Special Defense
Trait: Thick Fat
Item: Leftovers

-Yawn/Rest
-Eartquake
-Substitute
-Curse

Gengar

Hasty Nature
Evs: 255 speed/ 255 special attack
Trait: Levitate
Item: Leftovers

-Focus Punch
-Thunderbolt/Sludge Bomb
-Substitute
-Hypnosis

Alakazam

Modest Nature
Evs: 252 speed/200 Sp. Attack/ 58 HP
Trait: Sychronize
Item: Wise Glasses

-Guard Swap/Substitute
-Psychic
-Shadow Ball
-Focus Blast

Vaporeon

Quiet/Timid Nature
Evs: 252 HP/ 156 Sp. Attack/ 102 Def.
Trait: Water Absorb
Item: Leftovers

-Aqua Ring
-Ice Beam
-Shadow Ball
-Surf

Sceptile

Hasty Nature
Evs: 252 Speed/ 156 Attack/ 102 Sp. Attack
Trait: Overgrow
Item: Scope Lens/Razor Claw

-Rock Slide
-Leaf Blade
-X-Scissor
-Brick Break

...and that's it. Let me know what I can change.

Those are my changes. Hope it helps ^_^

 

[Alex_]

Why would heracross need Megahorn twice?

 

[sanjay120]

Nah, keep Scarf on Hera. Keep Shadow Ball on Gar. Put Choice Specs on Zam and use Trick over Disable. Vaporeon can keep its nature, but it needs Wish.

 

[Alex_]

Okay thanks for the help guys.

 

[Akuchiki Byakuya]

Heracross

Adamant Nature
Evs: 252 Attack/252 Speed/4 HP
Trait: Guts
Item: Choice Scarf

-Megahorn
-Close Combat
-Stone Edge
-Earthquake

Snorlax

Quiet Nature
Evs: 255 HP/255 Special Defense
Trait: Thick Fat
Item: chesto berry

-Rest
-Earthquake
-Curse
-Body Slam

Gengar

Hasty Nature
Evs: 255 speed/ 255 special attack
Trait: Levitate
Item: Lum Berry

-Focus Punch
-Thunderbolt
-Psychic
-Shadow Ball

Alakazam

Naïve Nature
Evs: 252 speed/200 Sp. Attack/ 58 HP
Trait: Sychronize
Item: Choice Band

-Trick(to get rid of the choice band)
-Taunt(for the umbreons that just toxic you and annoy you)
-energy ball
-Focus Blast

Vaporeon

Quiet Nature
Evs: 252 HP/ 156 Sp. Attack/ 102 Def.
Trait: Water Absorb
Item: Leftovers

-Acid Armor
-substitute
-Baton Pass
-Surf

Sceptile

Modest Nature
Evs: 252 Speed/ 252 sp Attack/
Trait: Overgrow

-dragon pulse
-Frenzy Plant
-Energy Ball
-Focus Blast

...and that's it. Let me know what I can change.

I tried to make it a little better and if you don't understand how to use some of those pokemon then just ask me XD