Frozen Heart

I like it, it's very good, very interesting. I really think you should continue it!
But the way you seperate dialogue at first was a little confusing.
There are a few grammar mistakes (yes, even the littlest ones count here in PC, xD)
You didn't capitalize some of the Pokemon's names and you forgot to capitalize Crystal once, by my memory and count.
 
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