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Good and Evil

Mini

Shiny Hunter
    • 145
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    19
    Years
    well here it is

    Just a simple plot with no twists at all *shifty eyes*

    episode 1 https://img67.imageshack.us/img67/9449/part18oa.png
    episode 2 https://img223.imageshack.us/img223/5532/part27hu.png
    episode 3 https://img68.imageshack.us/img68/9261/part33ps.png
    episode 4 https://img239.imageshack.us/img239/4696/part45an.png
    episode 5 https://img59.imageshack.us/img59/7105/part54zj.png
    episode 6 https://img216.imageshack.us/img216/4460/part67kg.png

    Characters:
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    Bios left to right :
    Name:Mini
    Age: 13
    Pokemon: Hero Treeko, Hero Togepi
    Side: Good
    Description: A new trainer that fights with good pokemon

    Name: Twiggy
    Age: 13
    Pokemon: Evil Mudkip, Evil Pichu
    Side: Evil
    Description: A new trainer that fights with Evil pokemon

    Name: Proffessor
    Age: ??? (who knows)
    Pokemon:
    Side:Good and Evil
    Description: a mysterious proffessor who helps out Twiggy and Mini

    Name: Ray
    Age: 12
    Pokemon: Hero Foretress, Hero Igglybuff
    Side: Good
    Description: He is quiet outside of battle, but inside he is totally opposite.

    Name:???
    Age:19
    Pokemon:Hero Marshtomp,Hero Combusken
    Side:Good
    Description:???

    Name: Roran "Stronghammer"
    Age: 17
    Pokemon: Absol, Houndoom, Sneasel, Persian
    Side: Evil
    Description: Roran lived on Dewford Island for the larger portion of his life, until he was thrust away. There was a raid on the village when he was young and all children and women were thrust away to Slateport. Roran had gotten seperated from the group and wandered all the way to Mauville, finding a Meowth and befriending it, for he had no Pokeballs, and taking Shelter in New Mauville. Until, that is, some idiot boy booted the generator, giving it Power. He realized that humans were unworthy, cold, and heartless. He rarely speaks and supposedly has no emotions left in his body. The truth, however, is that his one true emotions fuels him to move and kill numerous humans, just to find his lost cousin... is also ???s 1rst in command

    Name: Ryan
    Age: 13
    Pokemon: Haunter, Ninetales
    Side: Evil
    Description:???

    Applications
    Name:
    Age:
    Pokemon:
    Side: eg Good or Evil
    Description:
     
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    Not bad I may join after a few more eps.
     
    Too bad. I might join later, well, anyway, in Tiny, or Tickety *looks through comic* or whatever his name is go evil and start a whole TR thing again??
     
    Hey im starting to like this mini keep it up.
     
    All i can critisise is the grammar. Please work on that and ittl be fine.
     
    Time for a reality check Mini:
    Just ugh. I mean the sprites are atrociously recoloured, the plot seems as boring. You censored some words stupidly. Just don't put them in at all.
    Dont put in numbers for spech bubbles. Just put the first speech bubble above the other.A hell of alot of spelling mistakes and bad grammer. Completely alot of improvement is needed.
     
    i would love to join!!!!

    Name: Ray
    Age: 11/12 (I can't decide lol)
    Pokemon: Foretress
    Side: eg Good or Evil: Good
    Description: He is quiet outside of battle, but inside he is totally opposite.
    Sprites:
    [PokeCommunity.com] Good and Evil
    done by me
    [PokeCommunity.com] Good and Evil
    OW's done by [ Designed Child ]


    PS: TR = team rocket
     
    okays, looking forward to it :)


    edit: I like how my guys speech bubbles are orange! Its my fav color :)
     
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    Wow those comics rock ill join soon probably after 5 eps.
     
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