Hurricane of charcoal and splatter of juice ♥✖♥

[.safety]

Good day dear thread viewers :)

I am once again before you all with a handful of artworks for you to see and to criticise. Some of them

are digitalized drawings, other are coloured pieces (CG). I dare you to take a look to all of them and to

tell me your opinion/which is your favourite.

Here you are samples of my pieces. If you want to see the full view, I encourage you to click the link

below. Any comments made here, or in deviantart will be greatly welcomed.

https://road-safety.deviantart.com/art/Mio-after-concert-131488369

https://road-safety.deviantart.com/art/Lala-in-distress-131758971
Bondage warning. No nudity.

https://road-safety.deviantart.com/art/Don-t-cry-130248853

https://road-safety.deviantart.com/art/Blob-of-childhood-130363435

https://road-safety.deviantart.com/art/Show-some-gratitude-131352121


Thank you very much in advance!!

 

[sanny the hedgehog]

dang!!!
i cant really say which one i like the best
CAUSE THEIR ALL FTW!!
the only one thats okay is the first one
(cause we all know bass comes second to lead guitar!! jk, that ones amazing as well!!)

 

[ShinjisLover]

Spoiler:

The shoulders look like they could be much bigger than that.
And you should probably be able to see the palm of the left hand underneath the guitar. As for the right hand, it's much too small. It's not even the same size as the left hand.
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Again, the shoulders could be bigger. And no woman who isn't wearing a bra has boobs that are that perky. They should have a bit of pulling near the top where the breasts droop downward.
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The mouth seems a bit wide, but that's really the only thing I see wrong.
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This is too cute. However, the right eyeball should be smaller than the left. In this picture, the iris of the left eye is smaller than the right. It should be the other way around.
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This looks to be a very recent picture as nothing seems to be wrong except for one tiny little detail. The right eyebrow is thicker than the left. However, that's nothing to worry about at all.
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↑ My Review ↓ My Opinions

These are really amazing. ^^ You draw almost like a professional!
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[.safety]

dang!!!
i cant really say which one i like the best
CAUSE THEIR ALL FTW!!
the only one thats okay is the first one
(cause we all know bass comes second to lead guitar!! jk, that ones amazing as well!!)

Haha, thank you very much!!

Spoiler:

The shoulders look like they could be much bigger than that.
And you should probably be able to see the palm of the left hand underneath the guitar. As for the right hand, it's much too small. It's not even the same size as the left hand.
​

Again, the shoulders could be bigger. And no woman who isn't wearing a bra has boobs that are that perky. They should have a bit of pulling near the top where the breasts droop downward.
​

The mouth seems a bit wide, but that's really the only thing I see wrong.
​

This is too cute. However, the right eyeball should be smaller than the left. In this picture, the iris of the left eye is smaller than the right. It should be the other way around.
​

This looks to be a very recent picture as nothing seems to be wrong except for one tiny little detail. The right eyebrow is thicker than the left. However, that's nothing to worry about at all.
​

↑ My Review ↓ My Opinions

These are really amazing. ^^ You draw almost like a professional!
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Wow, thanks a ton for the constructive criticism. Now you mention it, I realise of all the flaws in my pieces xD Really, thank you. I'll keep everything in mind so I don't mess up in my next pieces <333 Thanks for taking your time to write all this, I really appreciate it <3333


More comments please?

 

[PikaFreak]

the 1rst and second are my faves. :)

 

[~*!*~Tatsujin Gosuto~*!*~]

I think for the arm for the first one, it should be on top of the guitar it would look better in my opinion. I really love the last 2 ones, they are simply amazing, but the 2nd to last one eyes aren't the same size


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