I'm NOT a Nerd! [VOTING]

[Comic Tragedy]

I'm a level 80 Paladin! XD

Summary: Use the render provided in the detail section to make a tag.

Participants: I am accepting up to 3 challengers (so 4 person battle including myself). We will limit it to whoever has applied a day after the first entry is posted.

- CT
- moments.
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Size Restrictions: Basic tag sizes.

Time Frame: 4 days after the first person I'm battling says he/she will battle me.

Details:

Use this render:

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Entries:

Comic Tragedy

moments.


GO AND VOTE!

 

[moments.]

Good luck Comic! Thanks for making this comp, it helped me jump back into graphics! XD

All you people voting, POST A COMMENT! We'd both love to hear your feedback and whatnot, so do it for us please.

 

[Cycle]

+1 moments
I dislike both of them most likely because of the render choice but here's my critique.

Comic Tradgedy:
+1: Rule of thirds
+1: Lighting
+1: Depth
-1: Effects
-1: Lack of foreground
-1: Flow
-1: Messy
Overall: -1 points

Moments
+1: Clean effects
+1 Composition
+1: Flow
-1: Negative space
-1: unfitting effects
-1: Lighting
Overall: 0 points

KIU both of you

 

[Deleted member 143209]

Not feeling either to be honest, I feel the render was just thrown into a pool of effects and there was little flow at all. The once that actually blended with the render more so was CT's, in saying that I really didn't like the colours or the BG, I think they were executed a little strangely. I'm going with .moment's because the tag is appealing except for the render, the render seems thrown in but it's more pleasing to the eye in my opinion. Nice C4D and texture use, nice size too. However, better attempts to make the render flow with the tag might be needed in future battles.

 

[BareBones]

To be honest, neither.

• Human Paladin. Just no. Play Horde like a real man.
• The render itself isn't really that good - It's very basic and low quality.
• The colours used don't really blend well with the render.
• The render neither stands out or blends well. It just looks like it was thrown in and some blur was used around the edges, again for both.

However, if I absolutely must pick one, I'd go with moments. because the colours work the best.