Impulse Gundam Project

[Syousuke]

I'll start with Force Impulse.
I havent faked in a year. Or otherwise a really long time so go easy on this one. Give me Constructive Criticism please.

 

[Kijin]

1. Title is extremely hard to read on the white background
2. One of the attacks symbols seems to be off unless my impression that 1 energy attacks costs being centered is totally wrong
3. The 1st attack requires a 10x
4. The 1st attack is really really broken for a 100hp basic without any drawbacks
5. Resistance type (fighting symbol) seems to be off-center
6. Fighting energy cost on the Colorless 'pokemon' is really really random

Other than those details, the winner-shop, title shop (albeit hard to read), art placement, text, 2nd attack energy cost, costing of non-1st attack abilities, and the assorted other tech stuff seems great. Overall, 7/10

 

[Syousuke]

Re: 1. XD Well I like it like that.
Re: 2. Its not supposed to be centered? Hmm... Im sure that when you have 1 Energy for cost it is placed differently.
Re: 3. Oh darn. I forgot about that.
Re: 4. You think so? Oh well. Then I guess i'll have to add the 'For each Tails Impulse Gundam does 10 damage to itself'then.
Re: 5. So it seems.. My bad. x.x
Re: 6. Oh well. It adapts nevertheless. Vajra is the Saber that Force Impulse uses. Tackle is just something I made up so it wont be too simple.

Thanks for your comments, Kijin.
ANd 7/10 seems satisfying enough for a start.

 

[Dream Illusionist]

Well, aside the errors Kijin said, I also spotted one: Pok?mon isn't written well.

In your card, it's like this: "Pok?mon"

 

[O]

If you don't know how to do it it's alt 0233. I think it's ok, but the name of the 'Pok?mon' was real hard to read.

 

[QFred]

It's a cool card, but has all those problems!!!

 

[Gokey Shuckle]

A 1 energy attack is suppoe to have it like that. And it's not was random to have a fighting type energy as it is to the Dragon Pok?mon in recent sets. But the name and HP is really hard to read. Fix it up a bit. I noticed something that a lot of people don't mention. the effect text has to be 10 pixels from both edges of the clear square where you put the attacks on. 9Not from the yellow border). 8/10

 

[Syousuke]

I made a new one.
Well.. I guess you COULD compare..

I like this one personally tho a bit better. Because the art is more significantly established.. Not just anime art. Artist is cool. Attacks are okay for a Basic. It wont be too costly. I wantted to make it not so deep, a bit simple. I have no idea if that wording is right so correct me if anything is wrong.

 

[Gokey Shuckle]

The effect text seems to be more than 10 pixels away. It must always be aligned with the Damage text. Damage text should be 10 pixels away from the box aswell. The name font is much better than before. Please read the tutorial.

 

[QFred]

The effect of the first attack seems a lil'... streched...

I like te card!!!

Still not able to see the title on the white background!!! Even if know what's written there...

 

[Blennix]

er. I have no idea what Impulse Gundam Project is but i do like the art on those cards, but those cards arent all that WOW

 

[opbeta]

not bad....but i can't see the title text.....

 

[opbeta]

also....the cards has a fighting energy......that is wrong

 

[Pokemaster Jonathan]

These are excellent i love gundam so these are a nice treat very cool writing

exellent job and 2 of my favs also

 

[devilicious]

also....the cards has a fighting energy......that is wrong

Thats not wrong. Whats wrong is that ya double posted~ ??

Nice Cards... Minun? o_o;
Meh, I dont freaking care about the title. If that title was included in some real card, it'd be pwnage~