Loquacity, I thought Moderators were supposed to approve threads D<
You know, You're supposed to post the team you aim for, not the one you have currently. That would be best for the raters.
First off, post your team in this format
Pokemon @ Item
Ability
Nature
EVs
- Move 1
- Move 2
- Move 3
- Move 4
I'll do an analysis on the team.
Skuntank w/ Razor Fang, Docile Nature, LV 71
- Toxic
- Flamethrower
- Dark Pulse
- Poison Jab
1. Razor Fang is hax, which means not many people will battle you in the standard MetaGame if you use it.
2. What is the damn level doing there? We don't need levels, as once a team gets into true competetive, it will all be level 100.
3. Any neutral natures [Docile, Serious, etc] are terrible as it should much rather gain in a stat than have a neutral one.
Empoleon w/ Splash Plate, Impish Nature, LV 71
- Surf
- Hydro Cannon
- Brine
- Ice Beam
1. Once again, we don't need levels.
2. Items like Miracle Seed, Charcoal, or any of the Plates are not to be used as they only provide a minimal boost.
3. What are 3 water moves doing on one moveset? Make it diverse! Include more moves of different elements instead of just one.
4. Impish? Impish downs Special Attack, which is probably one of its most important stats. Don't use it.
5. Hydro Cannon is the worst move. All forms of Hyper Beam are.
Charizard w/ Flame Plate, Quirky Nature, LV 72
- Blast Burn
- Fly
- Flamethrower
- Heatwave
1. Items like Miracle Seed, Charcoal, or any of the Plates are not to be used as they only provide a minimal boost.
2. Blast Burn is the worst move. All forms of Hyper Beam are.
3. Any neutral natures [Docile, Quirky, etc] are terrible as it should much rather gain in a stat than have a neutral one.
4. What are 3 fire moves doing on one moveset? Make it diverse! Include more moves of different elements instead of just one.
5. Fly, Dig, or Dive lets the opponent receive a free turn and therefore are not to be used.
6. Items like Miracle Seed, Charcoal, or any of the Plates are not to be used as they only provide a minimal boost.
7. We don't need levels.
Azelf w/ Mind Plate, Gentle Nature, LV 70
- Extrasensory
- Psychic
- Future Sight
- Nasty Plot
1. Items like Miracle Seed, Charcoal, or any of the Plates are not to be used as they only provide a minimal boost.
2. We don't need levels.
3. What are 3 psychic moves doing on one moveset? Make it diverse! Include more moves of different elements instead of just one.
4. Future Sight is terrible, the opponent could easily switch into a dark pokemon and before you know it, you've wasted a valuable turn.
Lucario w/ Black Belt, Naughty Nature, LV 71
- Brick Break
- Drain Punch
- Earthquake
- Focus Blast
1. Items like Miracle Seed, Black Belt, or any of the Plates are not to be used as they only provide a minimal boost.
2. What are 3 fighting moves doing on one moveset? Make it diverse! Include more moves of different elements instead of just one.
3. We don't need levels.
4. There is little Earthquake can cover between its standard set, scrap it.
Luxray w/ Magnet, Mild Nature, LV 71
- Thunderbolt
- Thunder
- Crunch
- Charge
1. What are 2 fighting moves doing on one moveset? Make it diverse! Include more moves of different elements instead of just one.
2. Why does it need the Special Attack with Mild???
3. Not needing levels ~
4. Charge is completely overrated. If it doubles the power of your next electric move, then it equals twice the power, so its worth two turns. But the whole combination takes two turns. So instead of wasting a moveslot for Charge, use Spark twice and it will be the exact same damage.
5. Items like Miracle Seed, Black Belt, or any of the Plates are not to be used as they only provide a minimal boost.
I could go on into a further analysis and provide movesets, but I'll do that later.
Also, your team is major Ground weak.
Edit: I suggest reading
this thread.