Juli's Funny Pages!

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    [PokeCommunity.com] Juli's Funny Pages!


    01. Boys and Slinkies

    02. Miltank's Nose

    03. Sea Sponges

    04. Old Man In An Elevator

    05. Welcome to...

    06. Proffessor Oak.
     
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    XDDDD; they're great, I love them. I told you about the first one earlier, how it needs some sort of punctuation after "slinkies." Other than that I don't really notice any other errors.

    So I assume they're all going to end with the -_-' thing?
     
    Ohm I forgot to say a new one is up now ^.^ Number 05. Welcome to..
     
    It's chasm, not casm. :]
    A couple minor grammatical errors, and I recommend using tails, but they're funny enough.
     
    It is meant to be CASM not chasm... its play on words... CASM stands for Cool American Sports Merchandise (it was a shop in Russia that was closed down).

    New Comic up btw. Number 06. Proffessor Oak.
     
    Did you just see a naked proffesor oak run by? Nope! LOL. But why the -_-' at the end of everything?
     
    Another small notation, but when using speech bubbles the conversation goes downwards.

    [Here is the first comment]
    [Here is the second]
    [Here is the third]

    Etc. It makes it much easier to read comics than having to guess what order things are in.
     
    heh. These are good, I have to admit.
    I love the recurring "-_-'" theme at the end.

    overall, I suggest continue these funny pages (I would call them panels, but your the one who made the title), and take nova's advice. :D
     
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