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XDDDD; they're great, I love them. I told you about the first one earlier, how it needs some sort of punctuation after "slinkies." Other than that I don't really notice any other errors.
So I assume they're all going to end with the -_-' thing?
It is meant to be CASM not chasm... its play on words... CASM stands for Cool American Sports Merchandise (it was a shop in Russia that was closed down).