Just Some Stuff.

[.inLOVE]

Just a couple of things I've been working on lately. Feel free to give me your advice.

^ Some really bad onigiri. I hate how it turned out. :[

^ A whole fast food set! I actually kind of like these.

^ A food set.

^ Cake covered with fruit.

^ A ringo, or apple, covered with caramel. My favorite food ever!

^ A plain pink bookbag.


So please, offer me your advice! Thank you!

 

[Conan Edogawa]

I think the back onigiri should have some shading where the two meet. And if it's possible to distinguish each fry with a darker shade that would help. The only other problem I see is the shading on the bag. Other than that they're really nice.

 

[= GPR =]

The style of the black shading against the colored food objects is definitely different, but still looks great! I actually love your works! I would suggest maybe lightening the tone of the outlining around white objects to a gray... but that might defeat your style... it's really up to you...

I also agree with Gir on the fries... you could probably do better job distinguishing the individual fries by darkening the outlines slightly... and darkening fries here and there... right now they look like they weren't processed through the slicer all the way ^_^

again, i agree with Gir... the backpack needs shading... probably on the side, since the way you have light hitting, it wouldn't shine there...

These are great! I enjoyed looking at them ^_^

Keep it up...

Keep Spriting!