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Kritiks n' Suggestions

Clamzawr

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    14
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    Yes. I spell 'Critique' like that.

    I Know nothing and I warn you my pokemon teams are BLAGH but I realize this and thats the good part, right? This is my team in platinum, I'm on my fourth badge and need suggestions/criticism on what pokemon I should replace, what moves have to go and if I should start over.



    Grotle Lv.30
    Ability- Overgrow
    Nature- Timid
    -Cut (I will get rid of this soon. Need a replacement move)
    - Bite
    - Mega Drain
    - Razor Leaf

    Meditite Lv.30
    Ability- Pure Power
    Nature- Lax
    -Calm Mind
    -Force Palm
    -Rock smash (will go soon)
    -Psychic

    Gastrodon Lv.31 (It was the first water pokemon available to me earl in the game)
    Ability- Sticky Hold
    Nature- Docile
    -Rain Dance
    -Body slam
    -Water pulse
    -Mud bomb

    Luxray Lv.35
    Ability- Intimidate
    Nature- Serious
    -Thunder Fang
    -Bite
    -Charge
    -Spark

    Beautifly lv.25
    Ability- Swarm
    Nature- Calm
    -Mega Drain
    -Gust
    -Stun spore
    -Morning sun
     
    Earthquake is good on Grotle.

    Meditite wants physical moves to support his Pure Power ability, so get rid of Calm Mind and Psychic and add something like Psycho Cut and...idk maybe an elemental punch.

    Luxray only need one electric attack so get rid of Thunder Fang, he has other good physical moves like Ice/Fire Fang or Quick Attack.

    Everything else is decent.
     
    Okay I'ma start with "OMFG WHY DOES UR GROTLE KNOW TWO GRASS MOVES AND UR LUXRAY KNOW TWO ELECTRIC MOVES?!?@!?@!?#?!?#"

    Okay, yeah when Grotle evolves definitely Earthquake > Mega Drain, and Luxray Doesn't need thunder fang & spark.

    For a cut replacement I don't know, maybe rock slide if you get the TM? Oh and when Grotle is Torterra Crunch 100% over Bite.

    Good balanced team, but I fear you might soon need to do some level grinding
     
    I know. I suck ;o;

    But the fact that i'm still early in the game, have no money means I can't buy TM'S. Plus I wait until my pokemon are ready before I evolve them.

    I know earthquake is a must for Grotle. Also, I just learned of how useful a HM 'slave' can be. SO i'll be visiting the move deleter (wait, is there a move deleter in platinum?)

    I was also wondering today whether I should replace my Gastrodon with another water pokemon? Would it be recommended?
     
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