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La rousse city-deoxys battle tower

maximo

Bboy maximo
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    I?ve originally posted this at serebii.net but since this has fan fiction I might as well post it here as well.

    Chapter 1: arrival in la rousse city
    "No delcatty leave it alone" the 13 year old struggled to release the luxury chocolate box from the mouth of the rapid cat.

    "Delcatty give Nathan the box" Nathan's 13 year old girlfriend, Rochelle petted her delcatty lightly as she released the chocolates from her mouth.

    Nathan was a pokemon trainer who had just came 4th place in the hoenn league and is currently traveling with Rochelle to the famous la rousse city in there cubicle on a train.

    He is quite tall and muscular about five foot one and has an all around good personality, his skin is tanned and a bit rough his brown hair was shaved down to about an inch, his black eye's seemed to have a determined look and he is currently wearing a black tracksuit with a large blue pokeball running up the side.

    Rochelle is taller then him but much thinner and is about five foot two she has a friendly personality but s a bit shy, her hair was black and flicked to one side looking very silky, her skins tanned and smooth and her eye's were a deep black, she is currently wearing a long red skirt and black sleeveless top making her look a little Latino (Spanish).

    "Thanks Rochelle" Nathan thanked her while taking a chocolate and placing it in his mouth.

    Rochelle left him to eat as she groomed her delcatty feeding her with sweet's out of a pez container, Nathan stopped eating and looked at her sad face feeling a bit sorry for her since her grandparent?s just passed away.

    "Hay Rochelle i know these are hard time's but I promise I?ll take you out tonight for dinner" Nathan grabbed her hand rubbing it tenderly.

    "Thanks" she kissed him lightly which soon followed to an intimate kiss that disgusted delcatty who lay no the ground and started to sleep.

    Rochelle was now sitting on Nathan's lap still kissing him, they had known each other for a year now and had fallen in love threw there journey.

    "Just get it off you're mind and get in the mood for are date" Nathan gazed at her beautiful face falling in love with her all over again.

    "Ok while you're at the battle tower I?ll go and buy a new dress with delcatty" She returned to her seat.

    "Fine with me" Nathan stared out the window seeing beautiful scenery pass by making him feel peaceful but for a split second he swore he'd seen a menacing eye pass the train followed by a long green body which was surprisingly massive.

    The ride took about two hour's in total but they survived and stayed awake.

    La rousse city was a majestic metropolis built of giant metal buildings and Advance Street?s.

    "This is beautiful" Rochelle looked over the city seeing far away malls and gardens.

    Suddenly a robot hovered over to them with a smiley face on a screen, its figure consist on green and red block's and attached around the screen.

    "Hello, i am block robot 4x6.02 i will be scanning for you're passport's now" the little robot's screen had a little camera pop up that scanned there body's and then disappearing.

    "Scan complete have a nice day" two passport's popped up from one of the boxes, Nathan picked them up and the block robot hovered away.

    "Nice local's" Nathan said to Rochelle as they walked off.

    Nathan listened to the nice comotion feeling at home with the whole area nothing could break the silence.

    "MY BALOON!!" a little girl cried out as she watched her baloon drifta way in the air.

    "Go flygon" Nathan shouted as he realeased a giant dragon/insect like pokemon with green skin decorated with red circle's and a long red mane.

    "FFLLY" he squelled as it shot up in the air retrieving the baloon and handing it to the little girl.

    "Thank you mister pokemon" the girl petted the pokemon as Nathan and rochelle walked over.

    "Flygon return, hay little girl can you tell me were the battle tower is" he asked in a friendly voice.

    "it's the big circlee with lot's of pokemon on it" the girl answered politely and then skipping away.

    "Well thank's" they walked on heading for la rousse city street's were the adventure is about to begin
     
    There's a seprate forum for Pokemon fanfics.
     
    Thanks, heres chapter 2,enjoy.
    Ps. tell me what ya think of my fic.

    Chapter 2: battle tower- round 1
    Nathan and Rochelle have just entered the beautiful La rousse street's along with delcatty at there side.

    "This is beautiful maybe we could go there tonight or there or there" Rochelle couldn?t decide the place for the date, there was a variety of place's spreading over both sidewalks.

    "Well if there's good food..." It was revolutionary the thing to end all thing's it's, all you can eat for ten pound's.

    "Hay Rochelle...th...there" Nathan pointed his finger up to the neon snorlax sign still drooling over the offer.

    "Well if you do that and don't take me somewhere fancier you don't get the best part of the date, anyway you own one thousand pound for coming fourth in the hoenn league" Rochelle stroked under his chin as he fell for her beautiful face.

    "Ok I'll meet you in the pokemon centre in two hour's here's one hundred I?m going battle tower bye" Nathan turned around about to head for the battle tower but was dragged back by unknown force.

    "You're forgetting something" Rochelle pulled him back and put her lips tenderly on his kissing him for about ten second's.

    "Bye boo" Rochelle waved to him as he walked away heading for battle tower and her cloth shopping.

    'I miss battling like the good old day's, the fist time I got lil trapinch great time's...but then again he had a big *** head' Nathan thought as he walked down the street's.

    La rousse city was a island created to put trainer's to the test were all league competitor's wage against each other in a two on two pokemon battle.

    "Wow this is amazing it's so big" Nathan stared in amazement at the wondered hot dog stand...oh and the battle tower behind it.

    "Well no time to be thinking about food time to get my battle on" he ran into the battle tower pumped and ready for battle.

    Inside was like any simple pokemon centre with a few battle supplies.

    "Passport please" another block robot came up to Nathan now with a slot at the top to insert the passport, Nathan inserted it and retrieved it after a few second's.

    "Thank you please enter threw the door on the right and wait for you're partner to enter.

    It hovered away and Nathan walked over to the door's and going threw them seeing a small room were he must wait to enter threw another located in the room.

    Just then the door opened revealing a young boy about 13 five foot black hair that was spiked up a bit, hazel eye's and tanned skin but lighter then Nathan he was wearing a denim coat with a red and black shirt underneath and denim trouser's.

    "Hi I?m Kirk what's you're name" the boy introduced himself putting out his hand.

    "Hi Kirk, Nathan guess where'll be battling today" Nathan shook it returning to a waiting state.

    "So...Nathan what region did you come from" Justin felt a bit out of place not being around loud people.

    "Hoenn how about you" he started to loosen up a bit and get to now his partner.

    "Hoenn as well, now don't mean to be rude but that Wallace is a showoff" Kirk brang out the better side to him starting to enjoy the company.

    "Tell me about it he even tried to move up on my girl but i took him down in a matter of..." Suddenly a little speaker box in the corner of the room began to speak.

    "Introducing the johto league competitor's and the hoenn league competitor's that will be battling in the rock field today contestant's please enter threw the door's" they heard a little click confirming that the door could be opened.

    "Well let's do this" Nathan opened the door entering with Kirk.

    They walked down a long corridor and up a few steps where the battle would take place.

    They reached the end and were on a giant stone podium like thing with a stone gate so they would not fall of the side.

    The field was marked with the usual chalk marking's and had a stone surface and a few boulder's laying across the field, on the other side of the field two boy's stood on another podium.

    "Lady?s and gentlemen boy's and girl's let the battle begin" The announcer said into a microphone as all four enlarged there pokeball's throwing them into the field.

    Nathan had thrown out his green dragon insect, flygon and Kirk a giant silver and grey dino like pokemon.

    It had silver armor over its body and the rest grey his head was the most armored with a line of armor running from it down his back.

    "Nice aggron Kirk" Nathan commented on Kirk?s aggron and looked over to the enemy pokemon.

    One was a giant snake with a silver surface gleaming off the sun's ray's, it's face had a menacing grin to it and his chin had four jagged stone's under it and it's boulder body had jagged part's all so.

    The next was a black dog with a angry looking face, it?s head had two grey horn's that bent back a bit and orange was around his black nose, grey bone's ran threw his back and grey circle's went around his ankle also a little skull lay under his neck.

    "This will be cake, aggron take down that stellix" Kirk ordered as aggron charged towards stellix.

    "I got ya back Kirk, flygon use rock tomb on houndoom" Nathan pointed at the
    Dog as flygon dug his fist in the ground making a shockwave of rock's head towards houndoom.

    "Steelix use slam on aggron" steelix?s trainer called out.

    "Houndoom dodge and use flamethrower on aggron" houndoom's trainer ordered.

    Aggron was about to take down steelix but he was slamming down causing him to make aggron move out the way.

    Houndoom easily dodged the rock tomb and released a stream off yellow and orange flame heading towards aggron.

    "Aggron dig" aggron surprisingly dug his way underground with his mighty claws.

    "STOP HOUNDOOM!!!" houndoom had got a bad aim and ended up hitting steelix who received a lot of damage.

    "Flygon grab houndoom" Nathan had a plan brewing.

    "What are you doing" Kirk said to Nathan.

    "Trust me, make aggron come from underground and grab steelix's tail and swing" Nathan explained as flygon gotta hold of houndoom.

    "Ok, aggron grab steelix" Kirk ordered his aggron as he shot up from the ground grabbing the tail and swinging round steelix.

    "Flygon now" flygon released houndoom whom was sent to steelix.

    'WHAM' houndoom had been sent flying across the battle field by steelix's spinning body.

    "Aggron throw him now" aggron released the snake crushing houndoom under its body.

    "And with a fantastic finish Nathan and Kirk take the gold I?m gabby I?ll be seeing you tomorrow" Nathan and Kirk exited threw the door again and threw the other.

    "ARRGHH" Kirk and Nathan screamed in sync as the commentator was right in front of them with a man holding a video camera.

    "Would you care to commentate on this battle" she held the microphone towards them.

    "Well I don't care and if you push me we'll battle" Nathan told them as him and Kirk pushed pass and out of the battle tower.

    As anyone would predict they had bought there self's a hot dog each from the stand and were eating on the chair having a conversation.

    "So Kirk who did you come up here with" Nathan asked taking a chomp of his battle dog.

    "My girlfriend my other half my cremdelacrem my one and only" Kirk went on about his girlfriend as Nathan thought the same way about Rochelle.

    "You have a way with word's I?m here with my girl as well, hum guess will be the only unposh food I?ll get tonight I promised her I?d take her out" Nathan said as he eat the last piece of his battle dog.

    "Same here I?m going out with mine as well but we had the chance to have all you can eat for ten pound" Kirk eats his last piece standing up.

    "You now we ain't that different, well it was nice meeting you I gotta meet my love at the pokemon centre" Nathan stood all so about to leave.

    ?Hay wait a minute I gotta meet her at the pokemon centre as well I?ll come with you? Kirk told him with a smile on his face.

    ?Ok I can introduce you to Rochelle and you can introduce me to Urr..." Nathan paused not knowing Kirk?s girlfriend's name.

    "The one and only Vivi winstrate" Kirk told Nathan as his girlfriend?s face popped into his mind.

    "Vivi I remember her from route 111 she started crying when her marill fainted what happened to her brother" Nathan asked him remembering that day he versed the winstrate's.

    "He's in kanto collecting more badges"

    "Wow that boy never take's a break, well let's go" they took off heading for the pokemon centre to get ready for there date's.

    As they approached the door they took a deep breath and entered ready for the doom of there wallet's.

    The pokemon centre had a warm feel to it and the scent of flower's and nail vanish...

    "Hi guy's I?ve seen you've met each other" a tall girl sitting with Rochelle said to both of them.

    She was about 13 with long red hair and a happy face her eye's where a deep black and was currently wearing a yellow top with long sleeve's and a blue mini skirt.

    "Wow Vivi you've grown" Nathan said walking over with Kirk.

    "Thanks so have you" Vivi replied as they both sat down, Nathan on one side of the table with Rochelle and Kirk on the other with Vivi.

    "so when do we leave" Nathan asked Rochelle as she filed her nail's.

    "Oh i forgot to ask can Kirk and Vivi come, like a double date"

    "Anything for you as long as the night end's good" Nathan said putting his arm round her.

    "Oh don't worry it will" she replied sliding her leg under the table and rubbing up against his.

    "So Kirk how did the match go" Vivi asked him

    "It was awesome me and Nathan had a double battle with some johto guys and won" Kirk told her.

    "That's nice to know but now we all have to get ready" Vivi took Kirk into a hall were they entered a room as did Nathan and Rochelle in the next room.

    The room was a reasonable size with a double bed to the wall with a bed side table on each side.

    "So we got about half an hour to get ready put this on and don?t turn around till i say so" Rochelle handed him a tuxedo complete with tie as they both took there side of the bed ready to get dressed.

    In a matter of minute's Nathan had put on his tuxedo sitting on bed following Rochelle's order's by not looking at her.

    "Ok you can look" Nathan turned around looking from bottom to top.

    Rochelle was dressed in black high heels; tights a mini skirt and a black laced top with a red t-shirt underneath, her hair also had a rose running threw it.

    "Wow you look more beautiful every time I see you" he stood and they locked arm's leaving the room.

    In the center?s main area Vivi and Kirk stood waiting.

    Vivi was dressed in a red mini skirt and black tights along with a black top covered by a red sweater.

    Kirk on the other hand had the same black tuxedo complete with tie as Nathan did.

    "Well now were all ready let's go" Vivi said as her and Kirk linked arm's and they all took off threw the pokemon centre door's.

    La rousse city at night was quiet and peaceful as it was in the morning, Nathan, Rochelle, Vivi and Kirk walked threw spotting load's of place's to eat but everyone was better then the last.

    "So many food" Nathan and Kirk drooled trailing behind Rochelle and Vivi.

    "This place will do" the girls both stopped infront of a restaurant called
    ?La rousse France experience.

    ?This place sounds dodgy? Kirk said as they entered.

    Inside had red walls with a pattern on it and a red carpet with a different pattern to it and people eating around small black tables with no chairs.

    ?Excuse me can I direct you to you?re table? a tall man with a suit and a French voice said to them.

    ?Yes please? Rochelle and Vivi said politely, he took them to there own table handing them four menus.

    Vivi and Rochelle had to sit to one side to avoid the risk of looking out of place in there mini skirt?s.

    ?Hmm want to order a plate of spaghetti to share Nathan? Rochelle asked him with a soft sexy voice.

    ?Whatever you say babe?s? Nathan said awkwardly.

    ?We?ll do that as well? Vivi said.

    ?Ok two plate?s of seviper spaghetti please? Rochelle told the waiter.

    ?Yes madam and for desert?

    ?Hmm we?ll have eevee angel cake and a large snournut strawberry shake? Rochelle said to the man as he writes the order down.

    ?And we?ll have the clefairy ice cream with a large cleffa chocolate shake? Vivi told him as he writes down her order.

    ?You?re food will be ready in ten minute?s and then dessert will come fifteen minute?s later? he walked off leaving them to talk.

    ?So Vivi how?s you?re family I heard Vito was in kanto? Nathan asked Vivi.

    ?Yea he?s gonna challenge the elite four, my family?s all right as well moms training to enter pokemon contest?s dad?s training his newly evolved linoone to learn more elemental move?s and gran?s being?gran?

    ?Ha, she?s a trooper? Nathan replied.

    Time had passed and they had told each other about there experience of being trainer?s and co-ordinater?s, the waiter had came back out holding two plate?s of spaghetti.

    ?Enjoy you?re food? he laid them down on the table as all four of them grabbed a fork each digging in.

    All off them were going mmm and arrr as they eat the delicious spaghetti, after about thirteen minute?s they had finished with empty plates and half full stomach?s well except for Kirk and Nathan.

    ?Arrr that was nice where?s my dessert?

    "Even i think you're right for once" Rochelle said to him as she rubbed her stomach along with Vivi.

    Suddenly the waiter came out of the kitchen with a trolley that contained a cream cake about the size of a eevee with a strawberry milkshake by it and a bowl of vannilla ice cream with a chocalate milkshake by it.

    "And for le final course le dessert enjoy that and le bill" Nathan and Kirk's face dropped as they heard 'the bill'.

    Nathan picked it up reading the bill's price.

    "What the...fourty eight pound" Nathan shouted out as the whole restaurent directed there attention to him.

    "It's all right we'll go half and half" Kirk said handing him twenty four pounds.

    "Cool know let's eat"

    Nathan and Rochelle fed each other the angel cake as Vivi and Kirk fed each other the ice cream.

    They took sips of there milkshakes until it was finished and then left the money and the plate's on the table and leaving.

    They all walked down the street, the girls had there head leaned on there boyfriends shoulder as they enjoyed the lovely scenery.

    Soon enough they were in the pokemon centre about to enter there rooms.

    "Well see you tommorrow Kirk" Nathan said to Kirk.

    "Yea but i gotta get some shut eye, see ya" Kirk and Vivi entered there room leaving Nathan and Rochelle in the hallway.

    "So you ready for the next part of the date" Rochelle asked Nathan pushing her body next to his.

    "Yea i've been waiting allday" he said as they entered the room.
     
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