Legendary Trainers: Chosen Of Lugia

Eliana

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    Eliana: *looks around* what? Is there a problem
    Lugia: yes eliana maybe there IS! Maybe, oh, I don?t know?.. WHERE DID THE STORY GO!
    Eliana: ^_^; oops I forgot about that??im rewriting it?..because it sucked. Yes it did. I even admit it no one was reviewing so im gonna change it a lot??so here goes?..

    Legendary Trainers- Chosen of Lugia


    Chapter 1
    Location: Massachusetts, Eliana?s POV

    She?s gone. Forever. My best friend disappeared. Her name was Rachel. We were both pokemon fans. She was found missing last night?? but I have to move on- that?s what she would have wanted?.slowly, I cry myself to sleep, but little do i know that my life will never be the same again??..

    Later

    Sunlight poured down on my face. ?Nhhhh? I groaned. I opened my eyes. ?AHHHHHHH!? My scream shattered the silence.
    ?WHY am I in the middle of a forest!? I said out loud to no one. All I could se was trees around me. ?Okay? I told myself. ?Stay calm. Don?t panic. I?m sure there?s a logical explanation to this. Just find a path? I sighed and started walking through the trees.
    ?Dgeeeeeyyy!? a voice echoed through the forest.
    ?Strange? I muttered. ?That sounded familiar? I walked on. A river was flowing a few feet away from me. Suddenly, another voiced sounded. ?Ahhhh!? there was a blue thing in the rivers current! I?ve been a good swimmer all my life, so I did the obvious by jumping in and going after it. The river greeted my with cold water.
    ?Almost there? I thought. I reached out.
    ?Got it!? I said triumphantly. Suddenly, I couldn?t move. I felt myself falling into blackness??.
    Those eyes??..
    Those bright yellow eyes??
    I opened my eyes. ?Wha? What happened?? I expected my voice to be unanswered. How wrong I was.
    ?Well not much actually?
    I jumped. ?W-whos there?? I stammered.
    ?Well if you cared to look down you may find out?
    I looked down and yelped in surprise. ?B-b-b-ut that?s impossible!? I cried. ?Y-y-your not supposed to be real!?
    Standing in front of me, was what appeared to be, a real, live pokemon. Totodile to be exact.
    ?Well it is.? It said as-a-matter-of-factly. ?Eliana, welcome to the Pokemon World?

    Eliana: >_< so sue me! It?s a short chapter! Ive already started writing the others, which happen to be very long
    Lugia: *snickers* she lying!
    Eliana: how would YOU know!
    Lugia: >_<
    Eliana: stay tuned for the next chapter! Thanks for reading ^^
     
    Ohh this'll my first be my first time reading a fan-fic.
    You did great in describing it and put great details.

    From what you told me in MSN IM, I assume Tododile can talk for a special reason
    in the next chapter.
     
    yay! thanks swablu man! i even called you swablu MAN! il post the next chapter tonight ^^
     
    Eliana....this is gonna be a good story...well, it's better than mine...then again...mine's only 2 sentences long so far...XD But really this is gonna be a great story...
     
    Thanks pk! i got the next chapy done!
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    Eliana: Haha! You shall see this one will be long, and now my characters will be entering the story! Now in order of appearance I would like to welcome?..
    Electra!
    Electra: Hey all! ^^
    Eliana: and now??. Jenna!
    Jenna: What? Is there a REASON you said my name?
    Eliana ^_^; right and now?..Mia!
    Mia: Hey?..
    Lugia: You guys are LAME
    Jenna: WHAT DID YOU JUST CALL ME
    Eliana: ^_^; on with the chapter!

    Chapter 2
    Eliana's POV
    As much as I wanted to, I couldn?t believe it. It just wasn?t possible. ?Y-y-you cant be real? I stuttered. It sighed.
    ?If you must, go on, punch me. I?m solid?
    I took my hand and poked the pokemon. Solid.
    ?I?m a girl not an it? It- she said. I was dumbfounded.
    ?Amazing? I muttered. ?It really exists?..pokemon really exists?..?but wait a minute? I looked at Totodile. ?How do you know my name??
    ?Your jacket? she replied simply. I glanced at me jacket. There, in blue marker, was my name. I laughed. Suddenly, it came to me.
    ?Um Totodile? How can you speak human??
    She looked very confused. ?Um, Eliana- I hate to scare you but- your speaking pokemon?

    Electras POV
    ?Good morning Proffesor Oak!? I called as I entered the lab.
    ?Ah yes Electra its good to see you! How are you!? Prof. Oak walked over to me.
    I smiled. ?I?m good but- there?s something I need to ask you?
    ?And what might that be?? he asked.
    I took a deep breath ?I want to start a-?
    ?Pokemon Journey?? Prof. Oak cut in and laughed. ?Why didn?t you ask earlier? Follow me?
    We walked into a room with a few pokeballs on a table. He turned to me. ?There aren?t many left because some others came in the past few days but I?m sure you?l find one that appeals to you?
    I looked at him again. ?I was wondering if you had any electric types?
    ?Well?.I do?but Electric types can be very tricky? he then laughed. ?But knowing your name I?m sure you can handle it!?
    My eyes brightened. ?Thank you sooo much!?
    ?No problem!? he said as he got a pokeball out of his desk and released it.
    ?Pikaaaa pi!? a pikachu now sat on the floor.
    ?Ohh! It sooo cute!? I said admiringly.
    It seemed to glare at me. ?I?m NOT cute?
    I gaped at it, and then stared at Prof Oak. ?Did you just hear something??
    ?Hm? No I?m afraid not? He said, appearing to be very confused.
    ?Um okay?? can I have a pokedex??
    ?sure!? he said, running back to the desk and returning with a red device. ?enjoy!?
    I turned, with the pikachu reluctantly following me.
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    Jenna?s Pov
    ?Finish it off!? A scorched Pidgey flew away. ?Coward!? I yelled.
    I glared at my Charmander. ?You let it get away!?
    He looked at me. ?I?m sorry Jenna- it wont happen again?
    ?It better not? I turned and started walking. He followed.
    ?If you want to succeed, you shouldn?t yell at your pokemon like that? a tall girl with blue hair stepped in front of me.
    ?Mia!? I hissed. ?You again!?
    ?Well you wont be seeing me for long? she replied coolly. ?I don?t like to see people fail?
    I snarled. ?What makes you think you can do any better!?
    ?Did I say that?? She laughed, turned, and started walking the other way. I was furious as I saw her walk away.
    ?Who needs her anyway? Lets go?
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    Mia?s POV
    I sighed. ?All this walking is making me tired? I sat down on a stump.
    ?Come on out Lapras!? I sent out a pokeball.
    ?Heya Lapras? I called. You see, none of the pokemon I wanted were left, so the Professor was kind enough to let me train a Lapras he found from the wild. Thank goodness I was born able to talk to pokemon or otherwise she would be scared to death of me.
    ?Hi!? she said happily. ?I?m hungry!? she said.
    ?Hmmm? I said thoughtfully. ?I could have sworn that I had some berries in my bag? I fiddled around my very messy backpack until a few minutes later.
    ?Aha! Heres an oran berry!? I threw her the berry which she took gratefully.
    ?Yum!? she said while chewing the berry. ?This is good!?
    I smiled. ?Glad you like it!? I glanced at the darkening sky. ?Its getting late? I looked at Lapras. ?We should rest? she nodded.
    ?Okay your right! Goodnight!?
    I lay back on the ground. ?Good night!"
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    Eliana: HA!
    Lugia:?.. crud??.
    Eliana: and you thought it would be 5 sentences! HA! SEE YA next chapter!
     
    3 more mini-stories into one? Wow, this is awesome!
    The first story had a cool twist at the end.

    Electra's sounds like how Ash started his pokemon journey but it's better.
    And Jenna sounds like my crazy friend. XD (You might know eliana. :P)
    And did Mai's story end?
     
    hmm? what do you mean> ^^ they are all going to be appearing throughout the story:
    Rewrite of my other story. All of the legendary pokemon have children, but are taekn by Team Magma. They then take the children, put them in human bodies and brainwash them, and they dont remember they were ever pokemon......
     
    oop never mind i take that back its gonna be team rocket :P
    heres the next chappy hope ya like it

    Eliana: I?m bacccck!
    Lugia: from what?
    Eliana: You take things WAYYYY to seriously!
    Lugia: >_<
    Eliana: *sigh* no reviews! Heck I should give it time! Here goes!

    Chapter 3- Evil shows its face
    A few days later?.. Eliana?s POV
    ?Hmmm?.. I still need to give you a name? I said thoughtfully.
    ?I?m surprised Prof. Oak didn?t give you one?
    Totodile blushed. A day earlier, we arrived at Prof. Oak?s lab. Turns out Totodile escaped from it. So Prof. Oak let me have her.
    ?How about?..JULIE!? I suggested. Totodile smiled.
    ?Sure! That?s a great name!?
    ?You know whats strange?? I asked.
    ?What??
    ?That your in Kanto. You should be in Jhoto?
    ?Well that changed a whole ago? Julie explained.
    ?They kinda transferred pokemon around the world?..?
    ?Interesting?very interesting?.? My voice trailed off as we walked on??

    POV: Unknown
    ?John?. Any news??
    ?Yes, sir. It appears that legendary activity has increased in the Kanto region?
    ?Good- then get to work?
    ?At once sir?
    I hung up. I won?t fail this time.

    Jenna?s POV
    I don?t like being around people. That?s why I am not walking on the path, but in the woods. I felt my cheek bang against something hard.
    ?Ow!? I yelled, glancing up, to see a familiar shirt which bore the letter ?R? on it. Snarling, I broke into a run, not looking behind me.

    Eliana?s POV
    We walked into a sunlit clearing. Julie perked up.
    ?Julie? Whats wrong??
    Her response was in one, cold word.
    ?Rockets?
    I knew what she meant instantly.
    ?Where?? I asked, feeling the pressure build up.
    ?Somewhere in this clearing? Julie said with apparent hatred.
    ?Then what are you waiting for? Lets go get em!? I said looking at the vast panorama of the clearing. I heard a howl of pain in the distance.
    ?that way!? I pointed to the left of me. We started running in that direction. In front of us, a Rocket member was standing in front of a Mightyena and what appeared to be a Poocheyna and a Trapinch. The Mightyena snarled at the Rocket. The Rocket laughed.
    ?Your mine? he said, taking out a pokeball.
    ?I don?t think so!? I cried. The Rocket turned around and looked at me in surprise.
    ?Get awa- Huh?? A beeping noise was coming from his pocket.
    ?What?? he said in confusion.
    ?It cant be!? then he grinned.
    ?Oh Great Guardian do you really think you can hide from me??
    ?What!? I cried.
    ?You?re a whacko! Julie get him!? Julie poised into a fighting stance. He laughed again.
    ?You wont be needed to do the Guardian? he said, turning to leave.
    ?Once I get reinforcements you will be ours? he left.
    ?Wow, since when did rocket members become some whacko?? I asked Julie in amazement. She shrugged. I then remembered the pokemon. I turned to the Mightyena.
    ?Are you okay??
    she looked amused.
    ?A human speaking Pokemon? Interesting? her face then turned more solemn.
    ?And yes I am? she looked at the two younger pokemon.
    ?I?ve been taking care of these two but-? she hesitated.
    ?The Rockets- they have been around here more often?.? Her voice trailed off. I got the message. I knelt down next to her.
    ?I can take them- I promise I will take care of them to the best of my ability- and we can always visit!?
    She smiled.
    ?Thank you? She motioned to the young ones towards me. They nodded and went to me.
    ?You wont be disappointed I promise!? I said as we turned to leave.
    We waved goodbye, and headed towards the next town?..

    POV: Unknown
    I laughed.
    ?Oh Guardian, you wont get away!?

    Eliana: Ooh creepy! XD
    Lugia: Like you?
    Eliana: shutup. See ya next chapter!
     
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    LOL YAY I like it!!!...actually.......no I dont like it I love it!!!!XDLOL...could it trouble you to make it a little longer...^_^>_<...Anyways I like it...how you Talk to Lugia in the cegainning of everychapter its funnyXDLOL
     
    *sigh* thats my only problem..... is it REALLY short? sorry im trying to makeem a little longer
     
    hey its not THAT short........its short yes..but maybe more discription will make it longer^_^

    ~FireRyu~
     
    I do describe things! Lol the first chapgter is very detailed
     
    I want to read the rest of this story...it's awesome, Eliana...I think I'm gonna work on my FanFic tomorrow so I prolly won't post...
     
    lol ^^ i need to write somemore..... so i wont post for a while
     
    it's really a nice story Eliana.

    Me: MUST HAVE MORE!!!!
    Deoxys: Are there something wrong with you
    Me: No i just want some more of that story
    Deoxys: Oh, then get Eliana to irte some more
    Me: Ok, Eliana write some more please
     
    ^^ thanks....but someone who reviewed twice at fanfiction really hurt my feelings.....but i will go on.... :) im still writing chapter 4 though!
     
    Thanks! ^^ i should be getting around to typing chapter 4 soon
     
    eliana said:
    Thanks! ^^ i should be getting around to typing chapter 4 soon
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    Are ya finished with the 4th chapter yet?
    If so I'm just gonna put this so it wouldn't look like you're making a double post. XD

    Okay, that chapter was good...and long. Like always. :P
     
    Lol im not done typing it..... :P i will be shortly ^^
     
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