Lilo & Stitch Meets Pokemon - Song fics

[Houndour2004]

Viridian Hotel:

Now since my Jessie left me I've found a new place to dwell:
down at the end of Lonely Street at Viridian Hotel.
I'm so lonely, I'm so lonely,
I'm so lonely that I could die.

And though it's always crowded you can still find some room
for broken hearted lovers to cry there in the gloom
and be so lonely, oh so lonely,
oh so lonely they could die.

The bell hop's tears keep flowing, the desk clerk's dressed in black.
They been so long on Lonely Street they never will go back
and they're so lonely, oh they're so lonely,
they're so lonely they pray to die.

So if your Rocket leaves and you have a tale to tell
just take a walk down Lonely Street to Viridian Hotel
where you'll be lonely and I'll be lonely,
we'll be so lonely that we could die.

Houndour:

You ain't nothin' but a Houndour
Cryin' all the time
You ain't nothin' but a Houndour
Cryin' all the time
Well, you ain't never caught a Diglett
And you ain't no friend of mine

Well they said you was high-classed
Well, that was just a lie
Yeah they said you was high-classed
Well, that was just a lie
Well, you ain't never caught a rabbit
And you ain't no friend of mine

You ain't nothin' but a Houndour
Cryin' all the time
You ain't nothin' but a Houndour
Cryin' all the time
Well, you ain't never caught a Diglett
And you ain't no friend of mine
<
instrumental interlude>

Well they said you was high-classed
Well, that was just a lie
Yeah they said you was high-classed
Well, that was just a lie
Well, you ain't never caught a Diglett
And you ain't no friend of mine
<
instrumental interlude>

Well they said you was high-classed
Well, that was just a lie
Ya know they said you was high-classed
Well, that was just a lie
Well, you ain't never caught a rabbit
And you ain't no friend of mine

You ain't nothin' but a Houndour
Cryin' all the time
You ain't nothin' but a Houndour
Cryin' all the time
Well, you ain't never caught a Diglett
You ain't no friend of mine

The Rocket In Disguise:

You look like an angel
Walk like an angel
Talk like an angel
But I got wise
You're the Rocket in disguise
Oh yes you are
The Rocket in disguise
You fooled me with your kisses
You cheated and you schemed
Heaven knows how you lied to me
You're not the way you seemed

You look like an angel
Walk like an angel
Talk like an angel
But I got wise

You're the Rocket in disguise
Oh yes you are
The Rocket in disguise

I thought that I was in heaven
But I was sure surprised
Heaven help me, I didn't see
The Rocket in your eyes

You look like an angel
Walk like an angel
Talk like an angel

But I got wise
You're the Rocket in disguise
Oh yes you are
The Rocket in disguise

You're the Rocket in disguise
Oh yes you are
The Rocket in disguise
Oh yes you are
The Rocket in disguise

 

[Mr Cat Dog]

Erm... I don't really know what to comment on about this fic. Firstly, even with a song fic, you still need some sort of basic plot. Whilst the songs tell a bit, the audience/readers have no idea why James is feeling so bad about Jessie leaving. Why did Jessie leave in the first place?

Also, you could have at least described the hotel before James started bursting into a song. Also, where did the Houndour come into this? Was this just a bit of random outburst of music or was there actually some meaning to it?

What I would like to applaud you for is the originality in how you change the words of popular songs into Pokemon related songs. The Houndour one however did sound repetitive after the third verse though.

Another thing I would like to mention is that some people might not have heard of the songs, so it'd be a good idea to mention the original artist and track before the character bursts into singing it.

Well, that's about it. Add some actual plot in with a bit of description, and this should turn out quite good. ^_^

"A Vote for Justice is a Vote for MCD"

 

[Pogiforce-14]

It seems to be a spoof of an actual song, liek the "You ain't nothing but a Houndour" i slike 'You ain't nothing but a hound dog." Song. It seem sthis person basically took an existing song and made it pokemon based.

 

[Lizzie]

LOL those are so funny! LOL i love lilo and stitch! these are really good

 

[Pogiforce-14]

you can udnerstand that?O_o. cuse I didn't see how it really tied into anything at all, I couldn't make out the story through teh lyrics.