Lost in Hollywood

[kidpunk]

I love to write poems, and the title was taken from a song by System of a Down. Not copying and pasting the lyrics, just using the title.

Undenying Silicon
Waves of youths don't easily go
Out of this land and to their homes
They come in pairs and leave alone.

Trigonometery is whack
Waves of men come for their final end
And did I mention the disrespect?
Lets escape our fate.

I'm lost in Hollywood
I Know
Traverse the SM Pier
No Show
And Four short days 'Til I lose
My Foes
Leave this place and run
Fo' Sho.

For a backround, this is a poem I wrote last summer while visiting Hollywood, and most of what I remember was so negative. This poem sums it all up. I can't find the original poem and I never saved it to a computer so this is written from memory. I'm pretty sure some lines aren't original and there was another verse that followed the final one, but I can't remember it.

 

[TJgamer]

Wow, Hollywood?
That's pretty cool!

And the poem. It's pretty good, but I find it rather hard to understand it's meaning.
Keep it up, though!

 

[kidpunk]

It shows all the negatives about hollywood. Plastic Surgery, Kids drawn into gangs, disrespect, drug addicts, the lack of educated youth, and murder.

 

[TJgamer]

...Isn't that the case in pretty much every major city?

 

[kidpunk]

...Isn't that the case in pretty much every major city?

I visit NYC all of the time, and it isn't as bad as it was in hollywood. Maybe two parts of my poem applied to NYC, but it isn't as bad and dangerous.