Lucas out of Sinnoh [56K Warning]

[Tentachu]

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Yep, this is my new comic, Lucas out of Sinnoh. Credits are in the title picture above. As more comics are added, any necessary extra credits will be added to the bottom of the comic. I dunno if this comic is gonna be completed, but here we go...

Issue 1

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Issue 2

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EDIT: I didn't realise how big the comics were, but I've put the title page in a spoiler tag, along with the comics.

 

[haffeysucks]

Cool, I like it. Keep up the good work and I'll be a regular reader. ;)

 

[Tentachu]

Thank you for your comment, haffeysucks. And now for issue three:

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[[NovaPirate]]

Ok. Don't mix generations. ESPECIALLY not D/P and FR/LG, not only is D/P much larger, but they have different perspectives. Big no no. Good plot, but if he doesn't have time to get 1 coin, how does he have time for a Pokemon battle. Also, he magically teleports from Celadon to Pewter. Strange. Prof. Oaks lab is south, not east. Put some thought into character editing, advanced Pokerus plot is good, I guess. Besides those minor mistakes, it's good.

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Make the comics smaller, and put them in links. Major help, save them as .png, not as .jpg. I read the image location, it's .jpg alright.

 

[wmoor0826]

Ok. Don't mix generations. ESPECIALLY not D/P and FR/LG, not only is D/P much larger, but they have different perspectives. Big no no. Good plot, but if he doesn't have time to get 1 coin, how does he have time for a Pokemon battle. Also, he magically teleports from Celadon to Pewter. Strange. Prof. Oaks lab is south, not east. Put some thought into character editing, advanced Pokerus plot is good, I guess. Besides those minor mistakes, it's good.

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Make the comics smaller, and put them in links. Major help, save them as .png, not as .jpg. I read the image location, it's .jpg alright.

Wow dude, he has to go slightly right before he can go south. And him mixing the generations is the whole point of the comic, how is that a big no no?

 

[Matt Silver]

Because it looks horrible, and no sane reader would stand to look at it after reading other comics that actually look right.

An alternative is to make or find the sprites in FRLG format (Im sure you can find a Lucas and Professor Rowan somewhere). The story seems good and original enough, but the huge pictures are very very off-putting.

In short, move the pictures into even and smaller panels and change to png format. If all that comes to fruition, you'll be doing good. Keep it up, and please follow the advice given by me and Astral - because we've been in the area for a little longer I presume.

EDIT: Astral, he didnt teleport from Celadon to Pewter, it was Cerulean to Pewter.