Lugia_master's PC comic.

[Ryu-Chan]

Ok here is a new PC comic! Ill make charecter profiles later.

Ok comic 1

https://img387.imageshack.us/img387/7067/gfjhtjtuik7bh.png

comic 2
https://img147.imageshack.us/img147/2503/hmhgk5ph.png

im working on the other comics!

 

[adwajr]

Thstyst it?
Good going but you might wanna put a box around the words and draw a line directley.

 

[Ryu-Chan]

I might do that i that just how i started out.But its hard.Anybody can be in comiic.

 

[Omega Latios]

Boring Comic... And You Should Do Speech Bubbles.And They Just Say. "Hi!" Or Something... You Should Really Improve... 6/10

 

[Smarties-chan]

Boring Comic... And You Should Do Speech Bubbles.And They Just Say. "Hi!" Or Something... You Should Really Improve... 6/10

Look who's talking -_- I don't see many intelligent conversations in your comics either.

Anyway... This comic is rather boring. But all comics of this kind are, so that doesn't tell much. I suggest you make speech bubbles and try to come up with a more original plot. If I see another comic with spammers attacking PC I'm going to puke >.> You should really make more comics before you open a thread though, atleast enough so everyone knows what the plot is about. For now though... 2/10 I'm not a big fan of these kinds of comics, and the characters don't talk much either -_- Anyway... keep going and if you make an original plot I might actually give your comic a higher rating. Just keep at it and remember, originality is the key to a good comic.

 

[Ryu-Chan]

I might as whell join!

just delete the overworlds

u can join!anybody can!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

[Omega Latios]

By The Way, You Copied My Team Rocket Idea.

 

[Ryu-Chan]

So i couldnet come up with anythng else.
Anyway comic 3
https://img387.imageshack.us/img387/4605/hfkloiul7ew.png

 

[Crystal Walrus]

ok i change my mind i might join when you get speech bubbles

 

[MOON~DANCER]

theyr all about pc and have the front page in it...sry but thats a li borning....find screenshots or something...

 

[Flaming Quilava]

God. Boring. Nothing happening. Screen shots, buable, and stuff like that.

 

[Karasu]

I agree with DM... It's boring, pointless, and sloppy. And that Team Rocket thing's been used so many times, making it even more un-interesting... >.>

 

[Silon]

Try using a user-friendly text box.
Please credit me. :)

 

[Karasuma]

Try using a user-friendly text box.
Please credit me. :)

You sure you made those? I've seen plenty of those speech bubbles in the sprites resources section and in other comics that are in SPPF and like Poke-Chow.

 

[MOON~DANCER]

just er surf under yahoo/google search image screenshots....