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Marupi the Mareep

Tamama

Kero Zero!
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    [PokeCommunity.com] Marupi the Mareep


    This pic was a request by my friend Random Blues from DA.
    I used my blue folder for the background XD. Shading made the wool look gray, but I think it was ok job.

    Please rate, comment, critique, etc.
     
    Haha I know random blues!

    Wow, that's pretty cool. My only critique is that the front paw that's facing upwards is a little awkward but, other than that, it's great! <3
     
    The paw is facing sort of. . Upwards and not outwards like it should be. Also, the highlighting on the ears are uneven, but should be even. The one on the left ear should be up a bit more. There should probably be one little puff of fur on its side since its side looks pretty bare. And some of the outlines overlap with the highlighting on the tail.

    All of the coloring is pretty uneven and seems like it was done with colored pencils. The white outline around the ball on the tail makes the ball of the tail seem like it's flat on its left side.

    Really, though, most of these are just minor errors. Otherwise, it's a really cute picture. I love the green bow. It just. . Goes. XD​
     
    ShinjisLover said:
    The paw is facing sort of. . Upwards and not outwards like it should be. Also, the highlighting on the ears are uneven, but should be even. The one on the left ear should be up a bit more. There should probably be one little puff of fur on its side since its side looks pretty bare. And some of the outlines overlap with the highlighting on the tail.​


    All of the coloring is pretty uneven and seems like it was done with colored pencils. The white outline around the ball on the tail makes the ball of the tail seem like it's flat on its left side.​

    Really, though, most of these are just minor errors. Otherwise, it's a really cute picture. I love the green bow. It just. . Goes. XD​
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    Wow, you saw all my mistakes that I knew I made.

    Random Blues wanted a green ribbon so I put it there.
    I use colored pencils, yes. I am a horrible colorer and my outline was not that great for this artwork.

    Still, I know I'm not perfect, but I plan to improve and maybe mkae more fan art for others.
     
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