Master of the pokemon

[evilmetal2004]

HI my name is john (metal in IRC)

this is my first fanfic roleplaying pokemon i ever written, so please enjoy, comments will be helpfull. :cheeky:




Master of the pokemon

Chapter 1 ? The journey begins


Have you ever imagine what it feels to travel around many interesting places, well
I do. My name is John, I am about to tell you My adventure of pokemon. It all started last
week, it was Monday morning and my pokemon journey was about to begin. I couldn?t
wait to get my starter, I was hoping for a treecko or a mudkip it wouldn?t matter because
I loved pokemon all the same. Mom called for pancakes and I spilled honey on it
?yummm? I said, ?You like it honey?? she asked, mom was a person I could rely on for
anything I need. ?mother I was wondering if I could know what time am I supposed to go
get my starter?. Mother looked at me with expression, she never expected me to ask such
a question ?what are you talking about son, you were supposed to pick up your starter
yesterday? she replied. ?what? this cant be, I cant be wrong? I ran out of mom?s house
and headed myself to professor?s birch lab, he was seated in his lab desk looking at a
girls gone pokemon magazine, ?huh, professor? I was wondering. when am I getting my
starter? He was happy and looking at his magazine with excitement. ?huh, professor?? I
yelled. He looked at me and put his magazine away. ?I imagine you are here to get your
starter, right? He took a bookbag and took three pokeballs out. ?professor, I know i am a
little late but??.? , ?late!, yea you sure are late? he replied. ?but professor I was too
busy? My cheeks were red and couldn?t say my words clearly. ?yea, I know you were
busy sleeping, right? He gave me the look someone gives you to tell you your lazy or you
did something wrong. ?hee hee, well yea I was sleeping and too excited to start my
journey that I totally forgot about it?. I looked at him and he grinned ?well boy I know
how you feel , I used to be like you when I started my pokemon journey. Are you ready
to choose your starter?? he sat down in this small little chair that looked like a rocking
chair, I haven?t seen any of those in years and it reminded me of grandma. ?professor I
was thinking, can you show me the starters before I choose any? I asked. He took one
pokeball and released it ? I choose you mudkip? a fierce power of light came out and a
figure formed itself to a blue little pokemon, he looked like a seashell and had these
brown seashell formed cheeks. ?I don?t Kinda want that Pokemon professor, I want
another type of Pokemon please professor let me have a look at The rest Of the
pokemon? The Professor took another pokeball and released it, a green colored pokemon
came out of the pokeball , he looked like a lizard and had a large leaf as a its tail. ?well
this is treecko, he is a grass type pokemon and he can be a very good choice if you?re a
beginner? professor then called treecko back to its pokeball ?well you can decide on these
two because torchic was taken by a trainer already? I was thinking very wisely, if I took
mudkip it would be a good advantage on electric,fire and flying, but if I
choose treecko It would be an advantage against water,rock and ground.

?I think ill choose??.? An explosion was heard and three criminals appeared ?we are
team aqua and we are here to take your pokemon professor birch? they were on a
sharpedo shaped helicopter, they had taken a wild pichu and a wild plusle and minum.
?look professor they stole those pokemon? professor was serious and quiet, it was as if he
was thinking of a plan to get them back ?that?s it!, I have an idea john, lets use the
starters to get the pokemon back? professor threw a pokeball at me and I grabbed it
?pokeball go? out of the sky treecko was released ?do you know any of treecko?s
attacks?? professor asked. ?yea I do, I read tons of books about pokemon in the littleroot
town library. Treecko use your pound attack to get those pokemon? treecko jumped as
high as a flying pokemon normally flies and used pound attack but his attack was useless
because pichu, plusle and minum were trapped in a powerful cage of which treecko
couldn?t brake. Is this the end for john and professor birch? Tune in to the next chapter of
pokemon advanced????..

 

[evilmetal2004]

and so be it, no comments, no happy sayings, well pftt, bahww, here's chapter 2 i hope you enjoy and for god sakes finally post something

Master of the Pokemon
Chapter 2

"The rival's arrival"




Treecko felled down to the floor and stood firm, I was surprised to see such a powerful
Pokemon,"professor what will we do now?" I was angry at team aqua for doing such thing,
If I only had a powerful pokemon I would have helped better "and now prepare for your doom
You fools, you have no chance at beaten us team aqua, I choose you crawdaunt" a crawdaunt
came out of the pokeball and it looked pretty powerfull," oh no, I got to do something" team
Aqua wasn?t a small problem there was no way I could beat them with professor birch treecko
He was way too weak and he couldn?t even use razor leaf which was a worst advantage. I thought
That maybe if I used mudkip it would have help better, "professor pass me mudkip's pokeball,
If we use mudkip we may have a better chance at beating team aqua" professor birch took
A pokeball out of his book bag, "here catch" he tossed the ball at me "well professor here
Goes nothing, go mudkip! I choose you" mudkip came out and looked extremely ready for battle
"Mudkip use watergun on that cage" mudkip used watergun towarding to the cage but the attack
Was blocked by team aqua?s crawdaunt whose powerful bubblebeam not only blocked the attack
but also hit mudkip and took some damage to It.? no mudkip, are you okay?" mudkip looked
Okay but I was still concerned that the bubblebeam wasn?t as strong as it looked. It
Was the end for us and there was nothing I can do to stop it. "Now fools, prepare to suffer
The hard consequences, Crawdaunt use your bubblebeam to destroy them" crawdaunt attacked
And it was going towards me, until...."swallow use your whirlwind" a swallow came out of
Nowhere and used its powerful whirlwind to block the bubblebeam. "Now swallow use your steel
Wing to destroy the machine and rescue those pokemon" swallow flew up high and used its powerful
Attacks to destroy the helicopter, the pokemon were safe to the ground and so was I. I turned
Around to take a look at the trainer who had helped us, he looked familiar in somehow. "Hey
Professor" he said, the professor smiled and then he said "oh hi your Rory, you got you
Starter yesterday didn?t you? Rory was tall and had black hair; he had a red book bag that
Said varimon rules! And he had a belt of 6 pokeballs. "Yes professor I did, oh I imagine
your john right? He looked at me "yes I am" I looked at him back and then he turned his head back at me.
"Hey Rory what do you Say to a pokemon battle?" he turned around and grinned, "Pftt with you?
It ill be a waste of my time and yours,Anyways you don?t even have a pokemon as a starter and my swallow
will just beat any pokemon you choose" I knew he Was right but I wasn?t just going to give up.
I looked around and saw the pichu Rory rescued, I thought if I took That little pichu and trained it hard
it would evolve to a pikachu and soon to a raychu, and raychu was my favorite Pokemon anyways.
"Hey there little pichu, would you like to be my partner?" pichu looked at me and then smiled
"pichu pichu" it said "oh I see, so you do want to be my partner well i am glad" pichu jumped on my shoulder
and made a face as if it was ready to battle, my first pokemon battle was about to begin.
"well you ready Rory? because I am about to beat you and show you how weak you are" he smiled
and then took a pokeball out, "return swallow" swallow was on professor's shoulder and swallow was called back,
"oh, so your not going to choose swallow huh" he took another pokeball out, "I choose you torchic!"
a small torchic came out of the pokeball, it looked like a small fire chick and had a small tail,
it was colored orange and had these big eyes that made it look cute. "well I choose pichu, now pichu
use your....." professor birch stopped the battle and said, "wait, we can?t have a battle without a referee,
so ill be the referee. are you ready, this is an official 1 on 1 pokemon battle between john from littleroot
town and Rory from litleroot town. let the battle begin!" I ordered pichu to use a quick attack,
pichu was really fast, never had I seen a pichu as fast as the one I had." torchic use your ember"
torchic used an ember attack that formed to a burst of flames, pichu was hit by the attack, "pichu no!
are you okay buddy?" I looked at pichu, he looked okay but a little bit tired. "now pichu use
your thunderbolt" pichu stood there confused, "looks like your pichu hasn?t learned the thunderbolt technique,
so torchic use peck attack to finish this" I had made a grave mistake not knowing what attacks my pichu
really knew I should have known that he was still in about a level 5 pokemon and only knew some basic attacks,"
pichu dodge peck and use your tackle" pichu dodged the attack successfully and used tackle, torchic was hit
but it stood up to my attack and used another peck hitting pichu and leaving him on the floor. "pichu are you okay?"
I growled, Rory was stronger than I thought. I need to train more, there is no way I can beat Rory,
"Rory stop the battle, I give in, I need to train a little bit more, my pichu is not strong enough yet"
I picked up pichu and hold him in my arms,? the winner of this battle is Rory" Rory returned and look at me,
"I feel sorry for your pathetic pokemon, looks like you need more training but I could see your pichu
is quite powerful but I promise you that the next time we battle it will be a more intensive battle
and this time I wont have mercy for you" Rory turned around he shacked professor's birch hand and left litleroot town.
I decided to go back home and took my book bag, my clothes, my hand watch and some food for the trip,
"honey I hope your adventures are the best of the best and remember to call me every once in a while,
also don?t forget to change your clothes and to brush your teeth and to clean your book bag,
to feed your pokemon and to be careful not to talk to stranger, don?t go to sleep after 9:00 pm
and don?t forget to call in case of an emergency, also....
"mom stop! I am not a little boy anymore, don?t worry I can take care of myself"
I left home and came by to say a last goodbye to professor birch, "hello john, I know you chose pichu
as your starter so I won?t give you treecko or mudkip but I will give you a pokedex
that includes all the pokemon you have caught and that you see during your adventure, now all I wish you is good luck.
"thank you professor I really appreciate it I promise you I will take care of pichu and of this pokedex,
good bye professor" I took the pokedex and thought of all the pokemon I would catch and I will train,
I knew there was a bright future for me, "hey john, wait don?t forget, just like Rory i am giving you 6 pokeballs,
you will need to buy the rest so here take these for now" I took the pokeballs and I came out of litleroot town
I looked back and I looked with happiness because I knew I was going to come back someday. Tune in for the next episode

 

[oni flygon]

One best thing in writing fanfictions is to avoid using block style format. Try seperating in paragraphs so that it would be easier to read. Get it? ;)

 

[Mew13]

Yeah, it's really hard to read when you don't use paragraphs. You really need to capatalize too. I'd like to add soms Pokemon spelling errors... (not to be a nag)

Minun, not Minum
Swellow, not Swallow

Just tryin to help!

 

[evilmetal2004]

thanks guys for your comments, it really helps to learn more