Morchic- rated PG-13

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    "image removed"here is a new comic form Dragonstar productions. The more response and readers it gets the more chapters will be produced. Please critize it as much as you want, I am new at sprite comics
     
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    The story and characters seem good enough, you've made a brave move using a homosexual character as a protagonist, which I admire you for as most people wouldn't challenge the predujice. Your main problem is presentation. Work on your sppech bubbles and give them tails, also use size 10-12 verdanna as the font, thats the nicest for default fonts imo.
     
    FoxHound! said:
    The story and characters seem good enough, you've made a brave move using a homosexual character as a protagonist, which I admire you for as most people wouldn't challenge the predujice. Your main problem is presentation. Work on your sppech bubbles and give them tails, also use size 10-12 verdanna as the font, thats the nicest for default fonts imo.
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    Thank You for the Review FoxHound! I'm add you add advice when I reformat the next comic tonight. Avalon is in homosexual because I based him off of a friend of mine who has been like a brother to me.
     
    its was kinda funny. i liked it. i also agree with FoxHound!
     
    Pretty Cool.Excellent.Outstanding.*Thinks of more Words*Best ones I've ever seen.It's Funny so I agree with FatalizSik
     
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