Mr. Astronaut

[Anxiety.]

Mr. Astronaut

Words cannot describe this
It's hot, but I'm freezing
And it's dark, but I can see clearly
It's bitter to taste, but ever so sweet
It hurts, but I'm not in pain
It's a good thing, but it's so wrong
Its self explanatory, but I can't make sense of it
I like it, I prefer it, but I hate it with such a passion
I'm angry, but I'm kind of happy

I'm distant, and so are you
But we're going in opposite directions
I'm sinking, falling into the earth
It's eating me whole, and I'm not stopping it
My feet are firmly on the ground
And you're flying so high
The stars are close, but only you can see them
So goodbye, Mr. Astronaut.
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[wee187]

Wow, that got me thinking. I loved the pure juxtaposition of you and the person directed, and the rhythm was awesome. Nice job.

 

[Anxiety.]

Wow... I completly forgot about posting this xD Slow reply ftw.

Thank you! I wrote it at 6am because I couldn't sleep... well, I guess the best ideas do come late at night. I never write anything good in the daytime.