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Murder Mystery
Bang! I woke up in a daze I had almost fallen of the bed; I heard a noise from the next room. I was still half asleep and I was really mad that I had been woken up in the middle of the night. I looked at my clock it was half two in the mourning, I started groaning it was almost impossible for me to go back to sleep now that I was fully awake. I couldn't see anything so I waited for my eyes to adjust to the darkness. I got up, I didn't bother turning the light on if I did it would of hurt my eyes, especially now that my eyes were adjusted to the darkness.
I didn't want to disturb anyone else in the hotel; I stumbled over the rug in my room and nearly fell over. I decided to tip toe as it would make less noise. I opened the door all the lights in the hallway were flickering and the room next door had it lights on. I was wondering who would be awake at this time of night. The hallway didn't look attractive it was actually quite dull, but what can you expect from an old hotel in the middle of the countryside.
The light flickering made me think the owner didn't pay the electric bills. There were some portraits on the ceiling, the lights flickering made the portraits look like they had eyes and as if they were looking at me and watching my every move. It was like an illusion the ones that you see when you're at the Sahara Desert. I had doubt in my mind because it could be dangerous. I was wondering if I should go check it out or if I should just try and go back to sleep.
Well I don't know why but I couldn't stop myself from turning back I was too curious. I knocked on the door and there was no reply, I knocked again and I saw a shadow and then someone turned the light off. When I touched the handle I felt it was damp and wet. There was a chipping in the door it was only a small cut but it looked like there had been an forced entry the side of the door was bent and the door was ajar so some had obviously made an forced entry. I looked through the cut in the door, couldn't see anything.
My hand started trembling; I took a deep breath and forced the door. I stepped into the room and started searching the room. I tripped over something; I turned the lights on and found out that there was a dead body lying right before my eyes.
I soon as I saw the body my body stiffened I was as stiff as stone. I started searching my Pocket to get out my mobile and call 999 I then realised I had left my mobile in my room.
I looked around to see if anyone was still here, I saw a figure outside on the balcony.
The murderer was outside on the balcony I thought he had already seen me and has probably made a plan on how to escape or how to kill me as I was the only eye witness. I did not have any weapons on me so I took the nearest object and that was going to be my weapon. I approached the figure my breathing was getting deeper and deeper. I could hear drops of water but I knew it was not water it was drops of blood.
The figure started moving, went closer and closer I was so close I could hear is breathing. There was a switch next to the balcony door as soon as I switch on the light the murderer charged at me, luckily he missed he didn't bother trying again he just legged it.
I followed him all the way he ran all the way down to the lounge he opened the entrance door and slammed the door behind him stopping me from grabbing him.
I didn't even get to see his face clearly so I dint recognise him.
The next day the ambulance and the police came I started investigation at the scene of the crime the room where the murder took place. I checked the database to find out who he was his name was Eduardo Gonzalez he had younger brother who was less wealthy than Eduardo his brothers name was Ronaldo Gonzalez. I phoned up Eduardo's close friends and they told me that Ronaldo was always jealous of Eduardo. The Gonzalez brothers always had competitions in everything like sports, video games absolutely everything.
After phoning close friends and relatives I decided to phone Eduardo's brother.
His brother sounded really shocked that someone had killed his brother but for some reason I didn't believe him. Searched the room again and I found a clue It was a note.
The note was written by Eduardo's Brother and was saying he was going to kill him.
Later that day I went over to Ronaldo's house. I took a search warrant with me just in case he had any objections of me investigating his house. He welcomed me into his house I started searching the house straight away. I checked for almost two hours and didn't even find a single clue and Ronaldo didn't even look one bit nervous, I started to think I was just wasting my time trying to find evidence against him but I couldn't find anything. It was just use less. That note must have been a diversion to make me arrest the innocent one. Before I left I tagged Ronaldo's car so I could see where he was going.
I went back to the hotel and no one found a single clue I guess this mystery was never going to be unravelled. Well it was almost the end of the day it was starting to get dark and it was only six-thirty pm. There was a saying I heard once "yesterday is history and tomorrow is a mystery". Well I don't think tomorrow is going to be a mystery because I could not find any proof against Ronaldo or anyone else. The person who had committed the crime is an evil master-mind that person had planned it out to perfectly that person even forged Ronaldo's handwriting to make him seem like the criminal.
My PDA started bleeping it was Ronald's car that I had tagged earlier it was on the move. I quickly got into my car and followed him. Ronaldo got out of his car and went into the warehouse I followed him in and there was a bunch of other people there with him. I went in closer then I saw one of them hand a briefcase to Ronaldo. Ronaldo opened the briefcase and there was loads of money within the briefcase. I quickly called the S.W.A.T team they came rushing in and arrested everyone. Ronaldo tried to run away but this time I caught him. He was sentenced to 5 years in prison for murder. I soon found out why Ronaldo murdered his brother it was because his brother Eduardo was always better than him. He always hated his older brother Eduardo. He wanted to kill him but he couldn't then he was paid to kill which gave him a reason.
I will never forget that saying "Yesterday is History and tomorrow is a Mystery"
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