My Competitive Team - rate it please!

Slowpoke Nopoke

-formerly YanmegaLv55
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    • Seen Jul 2, 2010
    Altaria
    Natural Cure
    252 HP, 40 DEF, 216 SPD
    Leftovers
    Dragon Pulse/Sing/Sky Attack/Perish Song



    Mamoswine
    Snow Cloak
    252 ATK, 4 DEF, 252
    Choice Band
    E-Q/Blizzard/S-Attack/?


    Lucario
    Inner Focus
    252 ATK, 4 DEF, 252 SPD
    Salac Berry
    Substitute/F-Punch/S-Dance/F-Cannon


    Magmortar
    Flame Body
    252 SP.ATK,4 S-DEF, 252 SPD
    Choice Scarf
    Overheat/H-Power/T-Bolt/Focus Blast


    Ludicolo
    Rain Dish
    60 HP, 252 SP.ATK, 196 SPD
    Leftovers
    R-Dance/Dive/Toxic/Energy Ball



    Tyranitar
    Sand Stream
    4 HP, 252 ATK, 252 SPD
    Leftovers
    D-Dance/E-Q/Taunt/Stealth Rock




    Rate it please!
    I'm open to suggestions!
     
    You should have some descriptions explaining what each Pokemon does for your team. You also want to include their natures. Since I really can't tell what you want to do, I'll just give some general comments.



    Firstly, it looks like you have quite a few UUs on a OU team. Either drop all of the OUs or all of the UUs and change so you either have 6 OU Pokemon or 6 UU Pokemon.

    Altaria- Sky Attack and Sing are very iffy on Altaria. Most Altaria carry Roost, so consider that.

    Mamoswine- Choice Band usually has Ice Shard/ Earthquake/ Stone Edge/ Superpower or Ice Fang. Go with that.

    Lucario- Ehh, its too frail to pull off a SubPunch set. I'd just try the standard Smogon Swords Dance set.

    Magmortar- It works great in NU, but in OU Infernape and Heatran outclass it, if you choose to go OU.

    Ludicolo- Dive is pretty bad on Ludicolo, so I would rather go with Surf, since you are running a Special Attacker from the looks of the EVs.

    Tyranitar- Ehh.... Tyranitar can't pull off a DD set like that. DD Tar should be DD/Stone Edge/ Crunch/ Fire Punch at Babiri Berry.
     
    This looks like 6 random pokemon shoved together on a team....You need to have some sort of strategy or goal when you're building a team or it's just going to fall apart. Example being you set up Rain Dance with Ludicolo but then if Tyranitar just removes it with Sandstream and you've wasted a turn =(
     
    oh ssshhhiiizzzz.....
    you're all right
    I've planned since FireRed for a good team.
    :(
     
    could you please write descriptions and put natures up so we can know exactly what we are looking at
     
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