My Deck. give me some tips to make it better.

[zshadowzero27]

I dont have good cards at all, so just say what will help me deck out.

My Deck

Monsters

Blue-Eyes White Dragon (3)
Gilford The Lightning
Summoned Skull
Vampire Lord
Lord of D.
KiabaMan
Mask Of Darkness
Magician Of Faith
Hane-Hane (3)
Hade-Hane
Man-Eater Bug (3)
NobleMan-Eater Bug
Old Vindictive Magician (3)

Magic Cards

Pot Of Greed
Axe Of Despair (2)
Swords Of Revealing Light
Giant Trunade
The Flute Of Summoning Dragon
Prohibition
Monster Reincarnation
Monster Reborn
Enemey Controller
Raigeki

Trap Cards

Magic Cylinder
Call of The Haunted
Torrential Tribute
Trap Hole
Spell Shield Type-8
Shadow Spell
Shift
Sakuretsu Armor
CeaseFire
Nutrient Z

Give me some tips.
But this is for my friends at school we dont use the limited and forbiddeon card rules, But can u help me make it that i can use it for a tournament to?

 

[Zaikiro]

Some tips.

The Hanes are not much support. They may give field avdtange but they require time and ruins Gilford The Lightning effect making 3 tributes a waste.

I would take these cards out. Hane-Hane
Hade-Hane
Man-Eater Bug
NobleMan-Eater Bug
Old Vindictive Magician

They don't work well thogether. Because with the Hanes returning the monsters to the hand leaving no monsters to the Bugs to the destroy. Also leaving that to make your monsters get destroyed. And vice-versa, with destroying the monsters, you have nonthing to return to the hand.

Your dark monsters won't work well like that with no support. So Summoned Skull Vampire Lord will have to go.

It's best for your deck to a dragon deck since it's around that way. It's also good to do it with some warrior support.

You should add another Kibaman to get Blue-Eyes White Dragon out faster.

Some monsters that will help your deck are D.D Warrior Lady and Breaker the Magical Warrior, espacilly in offensive decks. Exiled Force may help this deck also. Same with Mystic S wordman Lv.2 or Drilloid for more protection.

So
+Kibaman
+Breaker the Magical Warrior
+Exiled Force
+Drilloid
+D.D Warrior Lady

Also a Magician of Faith would help instead of Mask of Darkness.

Shining Angel would help get Kibaman out faster so 1 would be good for this deck.

+Magician of Faith
+Shining Angel

A tribute monster would help thisdeck very well. Mobius the Frost Monrach is the best one now.

So + Mobius the Frost Monarch

For the Dragons.
The best for this deck to have offensive monsters like Luster Dragon/Spear Dragon. Either one will be Fine

Sagan is one of the best searchers in the game.

Twin Headed Beomoth is a impressive dragon monster.

Lord of D is perfect for a dragon deck.
Monsters=18

Mobius the Frost Monarch
Blue Eyes White Dragon
Blue Eyes White Dragon
Blue Eyes White Dragon
D.D Warrior Lady
Kibaman
Kibaman
Breaker the Magical Warrior
Drilloid
Exiled Force
Shining Angel
Magician of Faith
Luster Dragon
Luster Dragon
Sagan
Lord of D
Lord of D
Twin Headed Beomoth

Now to the Spells and traps.

Well first..Pot of Greed and Raigeki are banned so they are out.

Axe of Despair is good but equips are not always needed.

Prohibition is good for the side deck to get a specific card after a duel so you can be ready for your next duel.

The cards will help your deck.

Mystical Space Typhoon
Dark Hole
Heavy Storm
Premature Burial.
Snatch Steal
Nobleman of Crossout
The rest you have are okay.

Flute of the Summoning Dragon is needed for Lord of D. So that would be good to add.

Some offensive cards for your deck could be good.

2 Smashing Grounds or Fissure

Fusion cards for Blue Eyes White Dragon is good, Fusion Gate, Polemyzation or Dragon Mirror

Burst Stream of Desruction is good with a deck with 3 Blue Eyes White Dragon

Book of Moon is a helpful card for almost any deck in terms of offense and defense,

Spells-16
Nobleman of Crossout
Book of Moon
Flute of Summoning Dragon
Mystical Space Typhoon
Snatch Steal
Dark Hole
Heavy Storm
Premature Burial.
Smashing Ground
Smashing Ground
Enemey Controller
Enemey Controller

Giant Trunade
Swords of Revaling Light
Polemyzation
Polemyzation


For the traps.

Call of The Haunted and Torrential Tribute are very good to have which you have now.

Dust Tornado sis one of the best traps in the game. 2 should be good

Skakretsu Armor is better in 2's


Monsters-18

Mobius the Frost Monarch
Blue Eyes White Dragon
Blue Eyes White Dragon
Blue Eyes White Dragon
D.D Warrior Lady
Kibaman
Kibaman
Breaker the Magical Warrior
Drilloid
Exiled Force
Shining Angel
Magician of Faith
Luster Dragon
Luster Dragon
Sagan
Lord of D
Lord of D
Twin Headed Beomoth

Spells-16
Nobleman of Crossout
Book of Moon
Flute of Summoning Dragon
Mystical Space Typhoon
Snatch Steal
Dark Hole
Heavy Storm
Premature Burial.
Smashing Ground
Smashing Ground
Enemey Controller
Enemey Controller
Giant Trunade
Swords of Revaling Light
Polemyzation
Polemyzation

Traps- 6
Call of The Haunted
Torrential Tribute
Skakretsu Armor
Skakretsu Armor
Dust Tornado
Dust Torando

This would do better in tournaments.

Those are my suggestions, there are different ways to have your deck. I'm not a pro but I'm happy to help. ^^

 

[zshadowzero27]

Well your going to have to tell me where to get the cards you recommended that i dont have. SO i can get them. Thanks for the help.

 

[Mullet]

Traps- 6
Call of The Haunted
Torrential Tribute
Skakretsu Armor
Skakretsu Armor
Dust Tornado
Dust Torando

This would do better in tournaments.

You left out Bottomless Trap Hole because?:\

 

[Forci Stikane]

You should add another Kibaman to get Blue-Eyes White Dragon out faster.

Some monsters that will help your deck are D.D Warrior Lady and Breaker the Magical Warrior, espacilly in offensive decks. Exiled Force may help this deck also. Same with Mystic S wordman Lv.2 or Drilloid for more protection.

So
+Kibaman
+Breaker the Magical Warrior
+Exiled Force
+Drilloid
+D.D Warrior Lady

Also a Magician of Faith would help instead of Mask of Darkness.

Shining Angel would help get Kibaman out faster so 1 would be good for this deck.

+Magician of Faith
+Shining Angel

A tribute monster would help thisdeck very well. Mobius the Frost Monrach is the best one now.

So + Mobius the Frost Monarch

For the Dragons.
The best for this deck to have offensive monsters like Luster Dragon/Spear Dragon. Either one will be Fine

Sagan is one of the best searchers in the game.

Twin Headed Beomoth is a impressive dragon monster.

Lord of D is perfect for a dragon deck.
Monsters=18

Mobius the Frost Monarch
Blue Eyes White Dragon
Blue Eyes White Dragon
Blue Eyes White Dragon
D.D Warrior Lady
Kibaman
Kibaman
Breaker the Magical Warrior
Drilloid
Exiled Force
Shining Angel
Magician of Faith
Luster Dragon
Luster Dragon
Sagan
Lord of D
Lord of D
Twin Headed Beomoth

Now to the Spells and traps.

Well first..Pot of Greed and Raigeki are banned so they are out.

Axe of Despair is good but equips are not always needed.

Prohibition is good for the side deck to get a specific card after a duel so you can be ready for your next duel.

The cards will help your deck.

Mystical Space Typhoon
Dark Hole
Heavy Storm
Premature Burial.
Snatch Steal
Nobleman of Crossout
The rest you have are okay.

Flute of the Summoning Dragon is needed for Lord of D. So that would be good to add.

Some offensive cards for your deck could be good.

2 Smashing Grounds or Fissure

Fusion cards for Blue Eyes White Dragon is good, Fusion Gate, Polemyzation or Dragon Mirror

Burst Stream of Desruction is good with a deck with 3 Blue Eyes White Dragon

Book of Moon is a helpful card for almost any deck in terms of offense and defense,

Spells-16
Nobleman of Crossout
Book of Moon
Flute of Summoning Dragon
Mystical Space Typhoon
Snatch Steal
Dark Hole
Heavy Storm
Premature Burial.
Smashing Ground
Smashing Ground
Enemey Controller
Enemey Controller

Giant Trunade
Swords of Revaling Light
Polemyzation
Polemyzation


For the traps.

Call of The Haunted and Torrential Tribute are very good to have which you have now.

Dust Tornado sis one of the best traps in the game. 2 should be good

Skakretsu Armor is better in 2?s


Monsters-18

Mobius the Frost Monarch
Blue Eyes White Dragon
Blue Eyes White Dragon
Blue Eyes White Dragon
D.D Warrior Lady
Kibaman
Kibaman
Breaker the Magical Warrior
Drilloid
Exiled Force
Shining Angel
Magician of Faith
Luster Dragon
Luster Dragon
Sagan
Lord of D
Lord of D
Twin Headed Beomoth

Spells-16
Nobleman of Crossout
Book of Moon
Flute of Summoning Dragon
Mystical Space Typhoon
Snatch Steal
Dark Hole
Heavy Storm
Premature Burial.
Smashing Ground
Smashing Ground
Enemey Controller
Enemey Controller
Giant Trunade
Swords of Revaling Light
Polemyzation
Polemyzation

Traps- 6
Call of The Haunted
Torrential Tribute
Skakretsu Armor
Skakretsu Armor
Dust Tornado
Dust Torando

This would do better in tournaments.

Those are my suggestions, there are different ways to have your deck. I?m not a pro but I?m happy to help. ^^

:surprised I'm disappointed...KAIBAMAN!!??? ARE YOU KIDDING???? You have Paladin of White Dragon to work with, and you go over it for KAIBAMAN!??

:(

Sigh...I've made a BEWD deck in another thread, and I'm not in the mood to remake it here (for now)...if you want my fixes, you can go down a few deck threads for it.

 

[Zaikiro]

Well your going to have to tell me where to get the cards you recommended that i dont have. SO i can get them. Thanks for the help.

Google.com and TCG Player could help you with that. It better to try those likns because it will give you more of a sepific information of the card.

You left out Bottomless Trap Hole because?:\

It is not a staple. It could help but it is not for every deck. This is just my suggestion.

:surprised I'm disappointed...KAIBAMAN!!??? ARE YOU KIDDING???? You have Paladin of White Dragon to work with, and you go over it for KAIBAMAN!??

:(

Sigh...I've made a BEWD deck in another thread, and I'm not in the mood to remake it here (for now)...if you want my fixes, you can go down a few deck threads for it.

He had it in there so it bust have been okay. There is more than one way to summon it.

I think this is the thread you are talking about. It was one made out of thought.

 

[zshadowzero27]

Ummm i think Paladin of white dragon is just a waste cause yoiu giving up a space in magic for him and he sucks to tribute monster with 4 stars for him Kaibaman is way better to me.

 

[Zaikiro]

Ummm i think Paladin of white dragon is just a waste cause yoiu giving up a space in magic for him and he sucks to tribute monster with 4 stars for him Kaibaman is way better to me.

It is a very good monster, even outside a Blue Eyes White Dragon deck. As a face down destroyer.

You could try the Lord of D and Flute of Sumoning Dragon combo.

 

[zshadowzero27]

Yeah i have been doing that combo since the First Kaiba Deck

 

[Syousuke]

Without reading any of the above posts, i assume they covered everything.
I don't play YGO anymore, well not really, i only compete against my cousins now and then.
Here are my opinions on some of the things I picked up while scrolling around:
> No offense but BEWD sucks for me. I don't see any BEWD getting in the way of my deck, so withdraw.
> Paladin of white dragon is cool~ But I ain't a fan of rituals.
> LoD/Flute of Summoning Dragon are good.
> Breaker the Magical Warrior or D.D Warrior Lady are a good choice.
> zshadowzero, you have no idea what your talking about.
Ah well thats about it for now.
Once again I don't really like BEWD decks since none of them are really that successful (IMO) , a lot of tribute-monsters are really a no-no as well.

 

[zshadowzero27]

Without reading any of the above posts, i assume they covered everything.
I don't play YGO anymore, well not really, i only compete against my cousins now and then.
Here are my opinions on some of the things I picked up while scrolling around:
> No offense but BEWD sucks for me. I don't see any BEWD getting in the way of my deck, so withdraw.
> Paladin of white dragon is cool~ But I ain't a fan of rituals.
> LoD/Flute of Summoning Dragon are good.
> Breaker the Magical Warrior or D.D Warrior Lady are a good choice.
> zshadowzero, you have no idea what your talking about.
Ah well thats about it for now.
Once again I don't really like BEWD decks since none of them are really that successful (IMO) , a lot of tribute-monsters are really a no-no as well.

have no idea about what??