My First Attempt

[battlemaster]

how'd i do?

 

[Chibi Pika]

Oosh... ><

Sorry dude, but it could use a lot of help. For starters, check the tutorials and use the right fonts. Also, align the energies with the circles on the card, and also the PokeBody. And that's just the basic problems, I'm sure a master cardmaker go on for an hour about all the things that are off. =/

Also the wording should be different-- I think Water Proff should read: "If Skarking is damaged by your opponent's (Water symbol) Pokemon, flip a coin. If heads, that attack does half does half the damage (rounded up to the nearest 10.) And Megaton Pound should be "This attack's damage is not affected by resistance."

~Chibi~

 

[battlemaster]

thanks for the advice
and i just noticed i spelt "Proof" wrong lol

 

[Cascade Of The Sky]

pretty cool card :) good job

 

[Blennix]

*takes a breathe*
never! use sprites as pokemon illusrations
get the correct font as well

and the usual read the tutorial

 

[Emma]

I agree with the above, Read some of the tutorials and spell check before anything else xP
The text is near to the original, but it's very easy to notice that it isn't.

Although for your first card i will have to give you a 6/10 mark.

 

[Great Chikorita]

Did anyone notice that a part of the Delta Circle is gone? (the one under the "Basic" text.) and where's the card #, the rarity symbol, and the ID?

I agree with the other people here: read the tutorial and use the right fonts.

anyway, good card. :)

 

[~*!*~Tatsujin Gosuto~*!*~]

Its good for a 1st try. But take the other people's advice. Dont give up make more.

:t003:Dark Venusaur

 

[Emma]

I agree with what Dark Venasaur Just said, keep trying, your garanteed to become better if you carry on x)
Oh, Make sure you don't use pixelised Pokemon as it doesn't look really real.