My first comic

Rageman

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    My first comic:P rate and C+C :D
     
    Nice Backgrounds! :) 7/10 -It's funny, and the sprites are cute. I'd like to see more of your work! ^_^
     
    If this is hilarious than the youngest living person on earth is 150. You people seem to think anything with a joke is hilarious. It has no plot, mario is humping a rope and making sounds while he is. And yoshi has gained super teleporting powers. The mario hat was very badly drawn. Overall, this comic fails 2/10
     
    acctually, i would like to disagree there. The comic seems to ahve a D+ joke in there, with mario going to eat kirby, but kirby tries to eat mario, who is tied up as they are in a dungeon, which he would have been starving in (mario that is). Mario's hat is badly drawn, i agree there, and the last frame could do with a "later" box at the top, but overall i would give it about a 4/10
     
    Try adding more panels.

    And at least this comic has a background oo;;

    I give it a six out of ten. The speech boxes are ok, sprite usage was too, backgrounds were used, but your joke failed miserably
     
    I think it's great! You totaly got the backround down, the charectors are amazing! And the humor is superb! Only problem is it doesn't exactly make sense, like why are they there, how did they get there and who are they? If you answer those questions you'll receve a 10/10 from me ^_^
     
    lol well not always, is true, but the backround with the fire and all made me really curios as to where they are, and you're right, sometimes they don't need to, but sometimes they do like now
     
    the joke was bad, add another frame maybe to make the comic feel longer, *but then again im just used to 4 XD* but you probibly could have put another frame inbetween the second and the last with kirby sucking harder and the chain breaking or something then instead of yoshi you could have luigi there saying something like

    "you are my brother you stupid pink puff" (but probibly something better :P)
    *not paying out kirby there :P*

    eh i give it 5/10
     
    armadilloHD said:
    If this is hilarious than the youngest living person on earth is 150. You people seem to think anything with a joke is hilarious. It has no plot, mario is humping a rope and making sounds while he is. And yoshi has gained super teleporting powers. The mario hat was very badly drawn. Overall, this comic fails 2/10
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    plus it's like 3 frames long...no plot is an under statement...he's randomly in a dungeon,captured?..wtf is that about
    1.5/10
     
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