My Incomplete Diamond Team plz rate/help/criticize/etc?

[Vemmmu]

Hey, I'm new here and this is my team plan. I breed all my Pokemon, and am willing to re-breed if I need to… and I haven't used any TMs yet, so I have access to all those too. I have access to Ruby, Sapphire and Fire Red.


Magnezone @ Leftovers
Trait: Magnet Pull
EVs: 252 SAtk / 252 SDef
Modest Nature (+SAtk, -Atk)
- Thunderbolt
- Flash Cannon
- Manget Rise
- Thunder Wave


Empoleon @ Leftovers
Trait: Torrent
EVs: 252 HP / 252 SDef / 4 SAtk
Calm Nature (+SDef, -Atk)
- Surf
- Ice Beam
- Roar
- Stealth Rock


Garchomp @ Focus Sash
Trait: Sand Veil
EVs: 252 Atk / 252 Spd
Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- EQ
- Dragon Claw
- Sword Dance
- Stone Edge


Crobat @ Brightpowder
Trait: Inner Focus
EVs: 252 Atk / 252 Spd
Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- Toxic
- Brave Bird
- Cross Poison
- Roost


Regice @ Leftovers
Trait: Clear Body
EVs: 252 HP / 252 SAtk / 4 SDef)
Modest Nature (+SAtk, -Atk)
- Thunderwave / Psych Up
- Ice Beam
- Thunderbolt
- Amnesia


Tyrannitar @ Leftovers
Trait: Sandstream
EVs: 76 HP / 252 Atk / 180 Spd
Adamant Nature (+Atk -SAtk)
- Subsitute
- Stone Edge
- Crunch
- Focus Punch

I am open to moveset suggestions. None of these Pokemon are made yet. (Expect Regice) so feel to suggest to replace Pokemon you think are obsolete.

 

[aragornbird]

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Magnezone @ Leftovers
Trait: Magnet Pull
EVs: 252 SAtk / 252 SDef
Modest Nature (+SAtk, -Atk)
- Thunderbolt
- Flash Cannon
- Manget Rise
- Thunder Wave

Terrible lead. And the EVs are't great either.

Empoleon @ Leftovers
Trait: Torrent
EVs: 252 HP / 252 SDef / 4 SAtk
Calm Nature (+SDef, -Atk)
- Surf
- Ice Beam
- Roar
- Stealth Rock


Garchomp @ Leftovers/Life Orb
Trait: Sand Veil
EVs: 252 Atk / 252 Spd
Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- EQ
- Dragon Claw
- Sword Dance
- Fire Fang/Fire Blast

Fire Attack > SE. lol @ Focus Sash. Trying to survive an Ice attack won't work when you'll takr Stealth Rock damage beforehand.

Crobat @ Black Sludge
Trait: Inner Focus
EVs: 252 Atk / 252 Spd
Jolly Nature (+Spd, -SAtk)
- Hypnosis
- Brave Bird
- Cross Poison
- Roost

Ew. It can't do anything to Rocks and Steels. By giving it an Adamant nature, you're not even taking advantage of its Speed. Toxic is crap and so is Brightpowder.

Regice @ Leftovers
Trait: Clear Body
EVs: 252 HP / 252 SAtk / 4 SDef)
Modest Nature (+SAtk, -Atk)
- Thunderwave / Psych Up
- Ice Beam
- Thunderbolt
- Amnesia

Sorry, Stealth Rock weakness, low HP, and no Recovery move means Regice isn't a good DP Special wall. Get Blissey.

Tyrannitar @ Leftovers
Trait: Sandstream
EVs: 252 HP / 76 Atk / 180 Spd
Adamant Nature (+Atk -SAtk)
- Subsitute
- Stone Edge
- Crunch
- Focus Punch

If you're going to using Boah in D/P, at least take advantage of it's ability to make 101 HP subs.

You don't have anything that can handle Swampert, or switch into Rhyperior, or Gyarados and you still need to find a decent lead. Regice is definitely out for Blissey, Crobat can be replaced by Gliscor (still a purple bat, but handles Rhyperior/Heracross MUCH better) and Magnezone could be replaced for Grass Rope/Charge Beam Cresselia.

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