My Love Wants Roses

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    • Seen Jan 14, 2008
    cuz valentines day ish tomorrow!!! ^w^

    "My Love Wants Roses"

    My love wants roses

    The roses that don't die
    Ones that won't make her sigh

    With pretty petals smooth as ivory
    So she'll write about me in her diary

    Sir, she wants roses

    The kinds with fresh dew
    Ones that don't fade hue

    If I have nothing for Valentine's,
    "Surely," she says, "you won't be mine."

    No, not those ones!

    She wants one with the smell of orchards
    Oh please, before I get tortured!

    Sir, please do understand,
    My fate is in your hands!
     
    Que sweet~ Some rhymes seemed forced imo (second to last couplet), but the content is suitable for Valentine's day~ It's a simple, cute poem. Nice job. =)
     
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