My New RMT!

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    Here is my new rmt. I might have gotten bad with the items, but maybe not, and if so give me some suggestions. All advice and criticizement is welcomed!

    Claydol @ Leftovers
    Ability: Levitate
    Nature: Lax
    Evs: Hp 6, Speed 126, SpD 126, Def 252
    Moves:
    -Earthquake
    -Cosmic Power
    -Shadow Ball
    -Explosion

    Porygon - Z @ Expert Belt
    Ability: Download
    Nature: Docile
    Evs: Hp 6, SpA 252, Spd 252
    Moves:
    -Thunderbolt
    -Dark Pulse
    -Tri Attack
    -Ice Beam

    Electivire @ Expert Belt
    Ability: Motor Drive
    Nature: Adamant
    Evs: Spd 252, Att 252, Hp 6
    Moves:
    -Thunderpunch
    -Ice Punch
    -Cross Chop
    -Earthquake

    Lucario @ Focus Sash
    Ability: Steadfast
    Nature: Hardy
    Evs: Speed 252, Attack 252, SpA 6
    Moves:
    -Aura Sphere
    -Close Combat
    -Dragon Pulse
    -Earthquake

    Salamence @ Life Orb
    Ability: Intimidate
    Nature: Gentle
    Evs: Speed 252, Attack 252, Hp 6
    Moves:
    -Dragon Claw
    -Earthquake
    -Fire Blast
    -Stone Edge

    Blissey @ Leftovers
    Ability: Serene Grace
    Nature: Serious
    Evs: Hp 252, SpD 252, Def 6
    Moves:
    -Thunder Wave
    -Stealth Rock
    -Softboiled
    -Ice Beam

    Please comment!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
    Natures are mostly wrong.

    What the hell are speed EV's doing on Claydol? Max HP on claydol, please.
    SpAtt on Luke? And a Focus Sash? >_>
     
    Claydol @ Leftovers
    Ability: Levitate
    Nature: Lax
    Evs: Hp 6, Speed 126, SpD 126, Def 252
    Moves:
    -Earthquake
    -Cosmic Power
    -Shadow Ball
    -Explosion
    Shadow Ball is just...no. Icebeam overall has a higher base power and provides a better coverage. Icebeam is a wiser choice. Cosmic power is iffy, its really novelty to me. I'd rather have Rapid Spin, because Stealth Rock isn't very healthy to Salamence (especially with LO). Explosion is okay. I don't know where to squeeze Rest in there though. ><; Your EVs are all over the place, and Lax is terrible.

    Claydol @ Leftovers
    Trait: Levitate
    Nature: Relaxed
    EVs: 252 HP, 172 Defense, 84 Sp.Def
    - Earthquake
    - Icebeam
    - Rapid Spin
    - Explosion / Stealth Rock

    Porygon - Z @ Expert Belt
    Ability: Download
    Nature: Docile
    Evs: Hp 6, SpA 252, Spd 252
    Moves:
    -Thunderbolt
    -Dark Pulse
    -Tri Attack
    -Ice Beam
    Choice Specs loads it with more power, and PorygonZ switches frequently so don't worry about the one move effect. Neutral Natures are never the way to go. PorygonZ is a special sweeper, and therefore would require a Timid nature.

    PorygonZ @ Choice Specs
    Trait: Adaptability
    Nature: Timid
    EVs: 252 Sp.Atk, 252 Speed, 4 HP
    - Tri Attack
    - Dark Pulse
    - Thunderbolt
    - Icebeam

    Electivire @ Expert Belt
    Ability: Motor Drive
    Nature: Adamant
    Evs: Spd 252, Att 252, Hp 6
    Moves:
    -Thunderpunch
    -Ice Punch
    -Cross Chop
    -Earthquake
    Everything is alright on this one. There is an alternative Thunderbolt moveset. That would get more coverage and take Skarmory by surprise.

    Lucario @ Focus Sash
    Ability: Steadfast
    Nature: Hardy
    Evs: Speed 252, Attack 252, SpA 6
    Moves:
    -Aura Sphere
    -Close Combat
    -Dragon Pulse
    -Earthquake
    Focus Sash is ew. Sandstorm, other weather effects, and Spikes / SR completely ruin it. Two fighting moves on Lucario is ew. Consider Hidden Power [ELEC / ICE] over Aura Sphere. Or some other Hidden Power. XD Again, neutral natures are terrible. Lucario would love some extra speed. Consider Life Orb over Focus Sash. Naive for a nature. Mixed Sweeping Lucario without any Sp.Atk EVs is dumb :x.

    Blissey @ Leftovers
    Ability: Serene Grace
    Nature: Serious
    Evs: Hp 252, SpD 252, Def 6
    Moves:
    -Thunder Wave
    -Stealth Rock
    -Softboiled
    -Ice Beam
    Messed up. Blissey will be walling my apple juice with those EVs. It needs maxed out Defense to survive. Serene Grace on a Thunder Wave moveset is quite idiotic. Natural Cure is the way to go. Stealth Rock is terrible. Blissey has much better things to do than set up a Stealth Rock, Stealth Rock is such a commonly learned move, I suggest you let Claydol handle it. Consider Aromatherapy over Stealth Rock. I wouldn't trust Icebeam with a 75 Sp.Atk, Seismic Toss would normally inflict more damage.

    Blissey @ Leftovers
    Trait: Natural cure
    Nature: Bold
    EVs: 252 HP, 252 Defense, 4 SDefense'
    - Seismic Toss
    - aromatherapy
    - Softboiled
    - Thunderwave

    You need a better physical wall.
     
    What up with the natures? Porygon-Z needs modest, Lucario needs something else like Naughty, Salamence, Jolly or Adamant, and then Blissey needs Bold.
     
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