my new team

[chrome_angel]

Phew...its been a while but im gonna make a team. ive havnt thought out EVs so put them in there if you want, but tell me what you think

Smeargle:
Hasty (+spd,-def)
@ salac berry
Spore
endure
seismic toss
edneavor

Metagross:
naughty (+atk,-sp.def)
@ choice band
earthquake
Rockslide
Meteor mash
Explosion

Slacking:
naughty (+atk,-Sp.def)
@ choice band
earthquake
shadow ball
return
focush puch-(undecided)

Ninjask:
lonely (+atk,-def)
@ lieichi berry
Substitute
Silver wind
Baton pass
swords dance

Sceptile:
mild (+sp.atk,-def)
@ Leftovers
Thunderpunch
Leech seed
Leafblade
endeavor

Milotic:
modest: (+sp.atk,-Atk)
@ leftovers
Surf
Hypnosis/mirror coat
ice beam
Recover

I appreciate the help

 

[shanecdavis]

Fixes in bold:

Phew...its been a while but im gonna make a team. ive havnt thought out EVs so put them in there if you want, but tell me what you think

Smeargle @ Salac Berry
Trait: Own Tempo
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spd
Jolly Nature (+Spd, -SAtk)
- Spore
- Endure
- Seismic Toss
- Endeavor

Meh. I much prefer the Belly Drum version, but this can work. Wrong nature though. You are much better off with -SAtk (that you don't use) than -Def (which you could use).

Metagross @ Choice Band
Trait: Clear Body
EVs: 16 HP / 116 Atk / 252 Def / 124 Spd
Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- Earthquake
- Rock Slide
- Meteor Mash
- Explosion

Good choice. Bad nature. Take advantage of the -SAtk nature if you have no special attacks.

Slaking @ Choice Band
Trait: Truant
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spd
Jolly Nature (+Spd, -SAtk)
- Earthquake
- Shadow Ball
- Return
- Focus Punch

Again, no special moves means -SAtk nature. Learn it. Live it. Love it. Go with Focus Punch. Switching in against a sleeping Poke where the AI is too stupid to switch out is fun.

Ninjask @ Leichi Berry
Trait: Speed Boost
EVs: 12 HP / 244 Atk / 252 Spd
Jolly Nature (+Spd, -SAtk)
- Substitute
- Silver Wind
- Baton Pass
- Swords Dance

I won't mention the nature. Ninjask should ALWAYS be your lead. It cannot safely switch in on ANYTHING, especially with a -Def nature. Probably shouldn't be on your team with Smeargle, as it makes your team weak. Too many defensively weak Pokes become more of a liability than anything else, especially if they require setup to be strong.

Sceptile @ Leftovers
Trait: Overgrow
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Spd / 252 SAtk
Timid Nature (+SAtk, -Atk)
- Thunderpunch
- Leech Seed
- Leaf Blade
- Substitute

Endeavor doesn't work on this set. Besides, having two Endeavor users is bad strategy. The team is weak enough. No sense in compounding it. Sceptile wants Substitute. Between Leech Seed and Leftovers, the Sub is practically free. Another unmentionable nature.

Milotic @ Leftovers
Trait: Marvel Scale
EVs: 212 HP / 252 Def / 44 Spd
Bold Nature (+Def, -Atk)
- Surf
- Hypnosis / Sleep Talk
- Ice Beam / Toxic
- Recover / Rest

I prefer the Sleep Talk set, but your set works. Needs Bold though.

I appreciate the help

Really need to change either Smeargle or Ninjask.