My Not So Great Ms Paint Drawing

[Akeraz]

Urm, Yeah.

Tell me what you think.

 

[SethCullen]

its cool. I wish i could draw in paint. or just draw period.

 

[~xRaltzx~]

Thats not half bad for paint ^^ id hang it on my Wall

 

[ErnVern]

lol it's better than anything i could do. My best work is in spriting. I could never do a portrait...im not that patiant...

 

[Bombah!]

Looks cool, I couldn´t do this in paint (except spriting maybe)

But every artist needs critique (did I spell it right?? Hope so^^)

-The head has no shading at all, you should change it.
-The things on the legs have no shading either.
-I´d change the whole... um... stomache (sry, can´t find a better word for it) between the front legs (it´s too small IMO, and it should be more left)

Like I said, that´s just my oppinion.
Hope you could understand everything XD

 

[Legobricks]

What Bombah said, and:
Its right paws should be drawn more from a side view.

You're on the right track though, keep at it.