Sesshoukid
Tell the truth and run.
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Here are poems I wrote. There not the best, but I had the urge to write some things down. My poems are either in the form of a Haiku(but not about nature and I don't know if they'd be considered it but it does follow the 5,7,5 rule) or a Free Verse, plus one Acrostic(?). Please tell me what you think of them. I really want to know what people think. Whether my poems were thought to be good or bad, I don't care. I just want to know what you think of them. I may have something by some of them.
Tears
The tears on your face
are misplaced; they don't belong
there and never will
You
My heart aches to see
you; your beautiful face
right in front of me
Music
Music played every night
Unified to several genres
Simply playing along
In the darkness of my room
Consuming my thoughts to soothe me to sleep
(I had to write this for my Liturature class. My teacher said it was really good.)
Faces
I look around me
Several different faces
Eyes focused on her
(I also had to write this for Liturature. I couldn't think of anything so I picked something random.)
Your Love
I'm glad to have your
love, even if it's as friends
when I want it more
(Since I wanted this in the form of a Haiku, I couldn't add 'as' in the last line between 'it' and 'more'.)
Open Your Heart
Open your heart
See what's right in front of you.
It doesn't matter who
It doesn't matter what gender
It doesn't matter what happened in their past,
Just open your heart
To see what's in front of you
Happy
You make me happy:
Your light chocolate brown eyes
Your beautiful smile
Your presence and carefree attitude
Even just looking at your picture
All cause me to smile and be happy
Even if only for a short period of time
Together
Whether we're
arguing or laughing
we're still together,
so let's make
the best of it
Friendship
Your friendship means the
world to me; what would I do
were it to be lost
Cry Alone
The tears escaping down my face
give me relief when alone.
For to cry when in front of others,
I feel worse. Though, to cry when alone,
I can release my stress and feelings
My Love
My love is for you
More than you possibly think
It's more than just friends
Tears
The tears on your face
are misplaced; they don't belong
there and never will
You
My heart aches to see
you; your beautiful face
right in front of me
Music
Music played every night
Unified to several genres
Simply playing along
In the darkness of my room
Consuming my thoughts to soothe me to sleep
(I had to write this for my Liturature class. My teacher said it was really good.)
Faces
I look around me
Several different faces
Eyes focused on her
(I also had to write this for Liturature. I couldn't think of anything so I picked something random.)
Your Love
I'm glad to have your
love, even if it's as friends
when I want it more
(Since I wanted this in the form of a Haiku, I couldn't add 'as' in the last line between 'it' and 'more'.)
Open Your Heart
Open your heart
See what's right in front of you.
It doesn't matter who
It doesn't matter what gender
It doesn't matter what happened in their past,
Just open your heart
To see what's in front of you
Happy
You make me happy:
Your light chocolate brown eyes
Your beautiful smile
Your presence and carefree attitude
Even just looking at your picture
All cause me to smile and be happy
Even if only for a short period of time
Together
Whether we're
arguing or laughing
we're still together,
so let's make
the best of it
Friendship
Your friendship means the
world to me; what would I do
were it to be lost
Cry Alone
The tears escaping down my face
give me relief when alone.
For to cry when in front of others,
I feel worse. Though, to cry when alone,
I can release my stress and feelings
My Love
My love is for you
More than you possibly think
It's more than just friends
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